Talk:Blow (Beyoncé song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:22, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Side notes

• This was the very first song I listened to from Beyoncé, and in fact, this I why I bought the album; I LOVE the music video for it! Back to review:

Infobox

• Please list the full names for the "Producer(s)" parameter

Lead

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• Please insert "recorded" in between "...is a song" and "by American recording artist..."
• "It was written by Beyoncé, Pharrell Williams, James Fauntleroy, Timbaland, J-Roc and Justin Timberlake, and produced by the former two. " --> The infobox says it was also produced by Knowles and Williams
• Rest is great!

Background and production

• All great!

Composition

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• "Lyrically, it refers to cunnilingus through heavy innuendo omitting subtlety:[19][20][21] the lines "Can you lick my Skittles, it's the sweetest in the middle/ Pink is the flavor, solve the riddle" are sung "flirtatiously" by Beyoncé.[20][22][23]" --> "Lyrically, it refers to cunnilingus through heavy innuendos omitting subtlety;[19][20][21] the lines "Can you lick my Skittles, it's the sweetest in the middle/ Pink is the flavor, solve the riddle" are sung "flirtatiously" by Beyoncé.[20][22][23]" (Two changes made here: "innuendo" --> "innuendos", and "subtlety:" --> "subtlety;".)
• Rest is ****Flawless :)

Critical reception

• Wow! All great!!

Commercial performance

• ""Blow" also debuted at 118 on South Korea's international South Korea's international Gaon Music Chart, with points of 115,710 for the week ending December 22, 2013; that position also became its peak.[60]" --> Points?

Music video

• Wow! Another great section! Great work I must say!

Live performances

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• ", the word "Cherry" was lit up on the screen behind her in neon letters.[82]" --> ", the word "cherry" was lit up on the screen behind her in neon letters.[82]"

Remixes and other versions

• All fantastic!! :)

Credits and personnel

• Great!

End of GA Review:

Fantastic, absolutely fantastic work! I didn't find a single problem in two of the largest sections! Great work! A+!! On hold to address the very few issues I found during this review! Congrats! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 01:36, 29 June 2016 (UTC).

All  Done. Thank you very much for the review @Carbrera: and praise. BTW, this is one of my favorite songs from the album too, it's nice to hear that we like the same type of music. My love is love 10:35, 29 June 2016 (UTC)