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editI'm just going through and making some grammar and flow modifications as requested. I don't know the content that well, so I will try to the best of my ability to preserve meaning but if I accidentally change the implication or connotations of something, please let me know! Jppickar (talk) 12:36, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
- Okay, so after reading through quite a bit of this, it is obvious that a non-native English speaker wrote it. The intended meanings of many sentences are unclear and, probably accidentally, many violate NPOV. I don't know how to fix a lot of this without either leaving it as POV, or making content modifications I'm not qualified to make.Jppickar (talk) 13:02, 23 March 2021 (UTC)