Talk:Body politic

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Wegesrand in topic Lede is broken

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Lede is broken

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At the moment the first sentence of the lede is gibberish. Maybe someone knows how to check the history and find the last grammatical version? Wegesrand (talk) 12:32, 20 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

I just wanted to add that the first sentence of that article is Still gibberish and I'm glad this person noted it. This is my first edit and I don't know if I'm doing it right. --Persefony (talk) 00:44, 2 April 2019 (UTC)Reply

@Wegesrand and Persefony: I've rewritten the bulk of the article, the lede should now (finally) be intelligible. —Nizolan (talk · c.) 19:04, 24 May 2021 (UTC)Reply
Grand; I hereby withdraw my alarm. Wegesrand (talk) 11:56, 25 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Section after "Norman conquest" makes no sense to me

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The sentences after 'However, the Norman conquest proved one thing', don't seem to talk about the body politic -- or at least if they do, I don't find the structure of the sentences conducive to understanding how all this relates to the body politic.