Talk:Boiler design

Latest comment: 1 year ago by PrimeBOT in topic India Education Program course assignment

Hello

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Hello, This is one of the CAs of appointed for your class. I was going through you article and I have noticed that you haven't put a lot of references, and also, probably it's incomplete. Please consider working on these issues in order to avoid the removal of unreferenced content.Gunit31 (talk) 16:53, 2 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

We are adding information, pictures and references to it currently. Thank you — Preceding unsigned comment added by Madhura gurjar (talkcontribs) 16:54, 8 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

It is good to see that you have worked on the article since and this is really appreciated. Please continue your work and you will certainly benefit. Thank you. Gunit31 (talk) 06:22, 14 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

Suggest develop article in sandbox

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While it looks like this article has potential it needs a lot of copyediting etc to bring it up to Wikipedia quality. Please do the following:

  • Copy it to a user sandbox.
  • Replace it by a redirect (e.g. to Boiler).
  • When it is ready get experienced wikipedians to have a look at it - e.g. by posting a link to the sandbox on the talk pages of relevant articles.

Otherwise this article might be WP:PRODed or taken to AfD. DexDor (talk) 21:41, 4 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

Whilst agreeing with much of the sentiment here, I'd suggest leaving it as a minimal stub, rather than redirecting to boiler or steam boiler. Neither of these articles are good enough to be redir targets. Andy Dingley (talk) 23:18, 4 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

File:BOILER.jpg Nominated for Deletion

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Regarding editing of this article

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Hello, I have made an attempt to deal with the issues of this article. I am not an expert on the subject matter. So apologies if any inappropriate content is noticed, please excuse me. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gunit31 (talkcontribs) 15:17, 25 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

Hi, Gundit. Your edits aren't bad. The only problem is that the text you've written reads like an essay or story instead of an encyclopedia. This is just my opinion. Also, the lede section was following the manual of style before you changed it. That's a little more concrete of an issue than the prose issue I mentioned before. OlYeller21Talktome 15:29, 25 October 2011 (UTC)Reply
All right, I will keep this in mind and make every attempt to improve my style of writing in future. However, for now I would request you to please revert the changes that are inappropriate. And its Gunit by the way.
Regards. Gunit31 (talk) 15:34, 25 October 2011 (UTC)Reply
Hey Gunit, sorry for getting your name wrong. I hope you haven't taken offense. I apologize.
I think you're definitely on the right track so please don't be discouraged. I've reverted the prose issue edits already. Everything else looks good to me. OlYeller21Talktome 17:14, 25 October 2011 (UTC)Reply
Hey guys I also threw in some editing and hope it all comes off alright. It was a lot of terms that I am not familiar with so I just did some basic stuff. Cleanelephant (talk) 19:40, 22 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

India Education Program course assignment

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  This article was the subject of an educational assignment at College of Engineering, Pune supported by Wikipedia Ambassadors through the India Education Program during the 2011 Q3 term. Further details are available on the course page.

The above message was substituted from {{IEP assignment}} by PrimeBOT (talk) on 20:15, 1 February 2023 (UTC)Reply