Talk:Bold Orion

Mil Hist B-class Commentary

Looks good for a B-class article. I assessed coverage as "yes", because it looks covered and I'm taking in good faith it is, though I admit I am no authority on the history of ballistic missiles. I would suggest some sentence to wrap it up at the end, like, "With the success of the final test, the innovations of the Bold Orion were implemented in the next missile..." or something. Roger out. Boneyard90 (talk) 12:49, 30 December 2010 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 01:24, 20 February 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   prose: (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

1. weapins. Change to weapons.

 Done

2. USAF's. Suggest - Changing USAF to United States Air Force, as some people might not understand that acronym

I added a clarification of the acronym after where the full name is given on the line above.

3. change the Bibliography so that it is in alphabetical order.

 Done

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 01:24, 20 February 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! - The Bushranger _{One ping only} 01:52, 20 February 2011 (UTC)

That was fast! Nice work Bush, Passed. Thurgate (talk) 01:54, 20 February 2011 (UTC)

What country is this anyway?

It appears that this article has a minor case of UK English, e.g., "authorisation." As this is an American weapons system, designed, built, and tested in the United States, why is UK English even being contemplated for use here? It's bad enough seeing it in the ISS article but here there can't even be a remote excuse for it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 192.158.48.18 (talk) 18:41, 24 July 2014 (UTC)

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