Talk:Both of You, Dance Like You Want to Win!/GA1

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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 21:41, 7 September 2022 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this article.Tintor2 (talk) 21:41, 7 September 2022 (UTC)

Lead

• Everything looks well. The premise of the episode could be trimmed a bit like "The episode follows two Nerv mecha pilots who must"

Plot

• I wouldn't link countries since they are common links

Production

• Any comedic example?

I could not find anything in the cited sources. I could add examples, but I am afraid it would almost be a POV.

• "Hasegawa took care of the scene in which Shinji tries to kiss Asuka" I remember this scene but I wonder if it's trivial to show or, if not, mention it in the plot section.

Cultural references and themes

• There are comments about Misato and Kaiji's relationship but it is never elaborated in the plot despite its importance. It might be less trivial if you added an example there.

Reception seems well but the plot might be benefitted more if one of those interactions between Shinji and Asuka are mentioned at least in one or two sentences. @TeenAngels1234: That's all with this article review. Ping me once you solve the issues and I'll pass it.Tintor2 (talk) 23:31, 7 September 2022 (UTC)

@Tintor2: Done. Hope it works.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 19:49, 8 September 2022 (UTC)

Passsing Nice work with the article.Tintor2 (talk) 21:57, 8 September 2022 (UTC)