Talk:Bound (Fringe)/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Ruby2010 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 15:41, 3 October 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: Any notable guest stars?
- Lede: Can you expand a little more on the plot? It's only one tiny sentence.
- Plot: "the previous episode" -> "the previous episode, 'Safe'" Just so we know what's what
- Production: Add a citation after every direct quotes, such as "creepy and weird"
- Production: "out — it" -> "out—it" only use spaces with an endash, not an emdash.
- Production: "We had so much fun!" "That's probably my favorite sequence in the show thus far." There's two quotations back to back. Either combine them, or add a transition sentence
- Reception: The IGN review is just a bit chunk of paragraph. Maybe paraphrase some of it and cut it up
- Also, expand upon the Jack Bauer part and make sure you explain who he is and what show he's a part of
- References: The Fearnet link appears to be down
- References: 17, 18, and 19 don't have either a work or a publisher; 17 should be Gold Derby, 18 and 19 should be Academy of Television Arts & Sciences
- Categories should be in alphabetical order
That's really all I got. The images seem good and the prose reads great. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
- All done. Thanks, as always, for reviewing! Ruby 2010/2013 04:12, 5 October 2012 (UTC)
- I fixed the dead link issue, but other than that, all good. I pass.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:23, 5 October 2012 (UTC)
- Oh oops. I thought you meant the other Fearnet link (which I removed). Thanks for fixing! Ruby 2010/2013 04:41, 5 October 2012 (UTC)
- I fixed the dead link issue, but other than that, all good. I pass.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:23, 5 October 2012 (UTC)