Talk:Boundless Oceans, Vast Skies

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Dekimasu in topic Requested move 11 November 2014

Requested move 11 November 2014

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The result of the move request was: move the article to Boundless Oceans, Vast Skies, per the discussion below. Dekimasuよ! 20:04, 23 November 2014 (UTC)Reply


Hoi Fut Tin HungUnder a Vast Sky – per WP:USEENGLISH. "Hoi Fut Tin Hung" is a Cantonese pinyin approximation of the Chinese name, but there are no English-language sources at all that refer to it by the name. The article began life in that namespace, but was recently moved. Two English alternatives exist: "Boundless Oceans, Vast Skies" and "Under a Vast Sky". The former is a literal word-for-word translation, and the latter, which I much prefer, is a more elegant translation of the overall meaning of the idiom as applied to the song.  Ohc ¡digame! 07:04, 11 November 2014 (UTC)Reply

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Feel free to state your position on the renaming proposal by beginning a new line in this section with *'''Support''' or *'''Oppose''', then sign your comment with ~~~~. Since polling is not a substitute for discussion, please explain your reasons, taking into account Wikipedia's policy on article titles.
  • I prefer a move to "Boundless Oceans, Vast Skies" since I believe the original idiom 海闊天空 and the song does not imply anything about being "under" anything. Instead, the idiom implies "a free world". In any case, I support a move away from the current title since WP:RS rarely use the Cantonese transliteration to refer to the song. _dk (talk) 07:27, 11 November 2014 (UTC)Reply
  • Oppose - Sorry, _dk, but I found another alternative title, "Ocean Wide Sky High". This and "Boundless Oceans, Vast Skies" are literal translations. Bing Translator and Google Translator translate it as "A Brighter Future", which seems... a better translation, but not exactly accurate. Either title is not that common. I tried finding older sources that use "Boundless Oceans, Vast Skies" and "Under the Vast Sky", but came up empty-handed. Recent articles of this year can't be the only sources. I'll find more alternative titles soon. --George Ho (talk) 07:37, 11 November 2014 (UTC)Reply
  • The real point being is that the Cantonese phoneticised name is practically never been used. It's rather unhelpful of you to be digging around for other names to muddy the issue of the page move. Anything that doesn't have an official title is bound to have variants created by people translating on their own. Accuracy isn't the benchmark for WP:USEENGLISH, but the existence of reliable sources (in the case in English) is the determinant. The song was little known to the outside of listeners of Cantopop until the recent protests, and I'm inclined to say recent sources are as good as anything. -- Ohc ¡digame! 08:36, 12 November 2014 (UTC)Reply
  • I oppose "Under a Vast Sky" because... it's not as accurate as other English titles. However, I'm neutral on "Boundless Oceans, Vast Skies" because the 2009 article used it, indicating older reliable sources use it, but won't persuade me into supporting the title yet. --George Ho (talk) 02:48, 13 November 2014 (UTC)Reply
    • As I said before, [absolute literal word-for-word] accuracy really doesn't come into it. Our policy states that it all rests on what reliable sources call it. And as it seems to be a case of divided use, the tie-breaker ought to be what the article creator named it. -- Ohc ¡digame! 02:05, 14 November 2014 (UTC)Reply
If it's not just the accuracy, then it's also the usage of the proposed title. Older sources that refer to the song have never used "Under a Vast Sky" or "Under the Vast Sky". We can't move back to the proposed title just because many of this year's sources, whose authors have not been familiar with the song, commonly used it now. We must consider the weight and the reliability of sources that use any English title of the song. Perhaps I found that older titles carry more weight, like "Clear Skies, Vast Oceans" and "Boundless Oceans, Vast Skies", than "Under a Vast Sky". --George Ho (talk) 10:22, 14 November 2014 (UTC)Reply
The song has been known to Asians, not Westerners. Until the protests, translating the song's title hadn't been easy. Despite using more common English names, I don't think the authors themselves have listened to the song. They might have randomly copied-and-pasted either title to make either commonly used. They are lucky to work with reputable publishers, but shall we consider authors themselves reliable? --George Ho (talk) 08:00, 17 November 2014 (UTC)Reply

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