Talk:Bowling Green Offices Building/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 23:12, 17 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose  On hold

2. Verifiability  On hold

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

1.

• " 11 Broadway" - Is it just me or is there an extra space in here
  •  Yes, I removed it epicgenius (talk) 17:55, 20 May 2020 (UTC)
• International Mercantile Marine Company Building is a duplink
  •  Removed
• "2-story" - I feel like MOS:NUMERALS probably applies here
  •  Fixed
• " SogoTrade,[36][44]" - SogoTrade is a redlink, unless it's quite likely to be notable and the article just hasn't been written yet, I'm not sure if it's important enough, since the list seems to be selective
  •  Removed

2.

• "Reference no. 1927" - I'm not seeing this or the exact date of listing (day and month) cited anywhere
  •  Done Added a source. epicgenius (talk) 17:55, 20 May 2020 (UTC)
• Ref 18 appears to be a periodical, so information like volume and issue, if available, should be included
  •  Done
• Ref 22 needs the volume (Volume 11)
  •  Done
• Spot check of refs came up clean except for the issues above
• "New York, the wonder city, 1932" - Looks a little odd having the ref title in this case, while the other refs are in regular title case
  •  Done

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• Image licensing looks good

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@Hog Farm: Thanks, I have fixed these. epicgenius (talk)

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