Talk:Brandon Minor/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Giants27(Contribs|WP:CFL) 00:20, 1 November 2009 (UTC)

This article was nominated for good article status. The review began on November 1, 2009. Below is an evaluation of the article, according to the six good article criteria.

1. Well written?:

Prose quality:

• It appeared Minor was seriously injured on October 13 when he was carted off the field and left the stadium wearing a protective boot on crutches. However, for the next two weeks he and Brown combined to replace the injured Hart. These two sentences seem to contradict each other, was Hart injured? Or was Minor?

• Should be clearer now.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 00:28, 1 November 2009 (UTC)

Manual of Style compliance:

• Please add his birthdate to the lead.

• Done.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 00:28, 1 November 2009 (UTC)

2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:

References to sources:

Citations to reliable sources, where required:

No original research:

3. Broad in coverage?:

Major aspects:

Focused:

4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:

Fair representation without bias:

5. Reasonably stable?

No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:

Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

Overall:

Pass or Fail:

Nice work, I'll place it on hold to allow for the changes to be made.--Giants27(Contribs|WP:CFL) 00:20, 1 November 2009 (UTC)

I'm now going to pass the article, good work.--Giants27(Contribs|WP:CFL) 01:26, 1 November 2009 (UTC)

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