Talk:Brazilian Dreams/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:57, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

Comments

• "on April 26–29" well it must have been between 26 and 29, not "on" a range of dates.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

How so? The Rambling Man (talk) 08:29, 18 August 2013 (UTC)

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 19:01, 19 August 2013 (UTC)

• Infobox: why aren't the preceding and following albums notable enough for an article?

I wrote the article for Brazilian Dreams because it won the Latin Grammy, but if it is necessary I can write the other two articles. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

If they're notable, then at the least they should be red-linked. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:11, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 19:21, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

• "decided to record an album paying tribute to Brazilian music since he has been invited by several Brazilian performers to play their music" poor grammar. Needs a copyedit.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

• "and after his participation representing" seems clumsy, maybe... "D'Rivera also featured in..."

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

• Both MCG Jazz and Manchester Craftsmen's Guild link to the same page. Confusing.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

• No need to over link items like Manchester Craftsmen's Guild.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

• Allmusic->AllMusic.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

• " features Nazarian performing vocals in Portuguese language in a very convincing way" what? firstly bad grammar but secondly an odd thing to note.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

• Avoid SHOUTING in the references.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

I'll put the nom on hold for a week or so. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:01, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

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