Talk:Breakin' Point (song)/GA1

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 20:54, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

Infobox

• Fine

Lead

• Written by the band and produced by Emile Haynie → Peter Bjorn and John wrote the song and also handled additional prodution with Emile Haynie.
  • Additional production is not the same as "produced by". Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)

They are both producers you can include (add) in the infobox to be more specific. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:29, 6 April 2019 (UTC)

• The single only charted in the Belgian region of Wallonia, where it appeared below the top 50 of the Ultratip chart. → remove, see the reason below on the charts section.
  • I really don't see why this should be removed. The song did chart on a "Bubbling Under"-type part of the Ultratip for four weeks. The only difference between this and, say, the U.S. Bubbling Under, is that the positions are unspecified. Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)

That's a major difference believe me. It's not the bubbling under in Belgium, the bubbling under its the "Tipparade", that's under that. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:29, 6 April 2019 (UTC)

Yes, it's under the Ultratip, and it counts as having charted. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 7 April 2019 (UTC)

It charted? Where?? I see no position! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:16, 7 April 2019 (UTC)

CHARTS
Ultratip Bubbling Under: 11/06/2016 / Tip / sem.: 4

It charted as a tip. Pancake (talk) 12:04, 8 April 2019 (UTC)

It peaked below that, with no position, which is my main argument. If there is no peak position why make a charts table with it? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:08, 9 April 2019 (UTC)

The charts table can be removed, no problem, but that wasn't the issue. You wanted everything chart-related removed. Pancake (talk) 10:30, 9 April 2019 (UTC)

I think we might be getting somewhere here. Let's remove the charts table and this type of sentences need to be re-worked "The single only charted in the Belgian region of Wallonia, where it appeared below the top 50 of the Ultratip chart. " → it didn't chart, "The single only appeared below the top 50 of the Ultratip chart", or something in this vein, what do you think? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:08, 9 April 2019 (UTC)

Done. Pancake (talk) 14:10, 12 April 2019 (UTC)

 Done

Background

• Rename the section to "Background and prodution"
• Lasse Mårtén mixed "Breakin' Point" and Henrik Jonsson mastered the recording at Masters of Audio in Stockholm → should be in the end of the first paragraph.
  • Done.
• I will handle additional changes to this paragraph. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:35, 4 April 2019 (UTC)

 Done

Composition and lyrics

• Instead of a picture a music sample would be more appropriate.
  • I didn't include a sample because I felt it would be unnecessary for an article this short. Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)
• It features instrumentation provided by an electric bass, percussion, a synthesizer, and a zither. → symphonic strings, digital beats are accompanied by a slightly sorrowful whistling melody → very different from what you say, the rest is just the same.
  • I think you're missing the first citation. Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)
    • It was missing. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:41, 9 April 2019 (UTC)

 Done

Release and reception

• Ingrid issued a 7-inch vinyl on 13 May 2016 → Their label, Ingrid, issued a 7-inch vinyl on 13 May 2016 (it' confusing with the studios and the label sharing the same name)
  • Well it's not really the same, the studio is called Ingrid Studios and the label is called Ingrid. Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)

I know but it's confusing just simplified like I did and we are good. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:21, 8 April 2019 (UTC)

• Commercially, "Breakin' Point" only charted in the Belgian region of Wallonia; it did not enter the Ultratip chart, but debuted as an "extra tip" below the top 50 on the week of 11 June 2016. The song remained there for four weeks → remove all of this see the reason below.

 Done

Music video

• The desert scenes where shot in Wolin National Park and additional scenes were shot nearby a river outside of Warsaw → The desert scenes where shot in Wolin National Park and additional scenes nearby a river outside of Warsaw.
  • Done.
• Świebodzin → Świebodzin, Poland
  • If the video was shot in Poland, isn't it implied that even this is in Poland? Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)

The statue could be from any other place in the other world, plus it is not a famous city like NY, London, Paris or any other. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:47, 6 April 2019 (UTC)

• Styx → same as previous, needs context and place
  • Done.

 Done

Formats and track listing

• Should add the 7-inch format
  • It's there. Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)
• Is the Promotional CD single available for purchase or is just a promo for local radios, critics and labels? If so remove it.

 Done

Credits and personnel

• Peter Bjorn and John – additional production → shouldn't they also be on the infobox as well?
  • Haynie is the producer of the song. Additional production is something else. Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)

@PancakeMistake: We are only missing this, I will take a look at the rest in the meantime.

• • Done. Pancake (talk) 11:38, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

Charts

• If it peaked below the top 50 of the Ultratip chart, then don't include it. N/A doesn't excuse it being here.

 Done

Release history

• Fine

Notes

• Same as charts.

References

• Remove publisher from reference 9, you already have work on it. Henceforth you don't need both. Otherwise you would need to add both work and publisher to all other sources.

 Done

External links

• Fine

Overall

• You can now address this changes. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:36, 4 April 2019 (UTC)