Talk:Brian Simpson (musician)

Latest comment: 2 years ago by WikiJazzHub in topic Overall tone needs fixed

Overall tone needs fixed

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The tone of this article needs work. As it stands, it does not read as an encyclopedic article:

  • "...very music-oriented parents"
  • "The musician also states that his..."

Many more errors throughout.

Also, there are some grammatical errors. I can help chip in with some of these issues, but someone should consider adding some solid references as well. WikiJazzHub (talk) 22:46, 16 February 2022 (UTC)Reply