Talk:Brian Swibel

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Schazjmd in topic COI clean-up
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COI clean-up

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In April 2021, an IP editor added a huge amount of content with the edit summary Brian Swibel asked me to completely edit his page based, and more was added by a new editor.

I've done a clean-up pass on the article to remove puffery, tag unsourced claims (some removed completely), modify text to what sources actually say, add a few sources, and general copy-editing per WP:MOS. Some of the sourced claims don't actually mention Swibel or Triptyk. There's probably more pruning that could be done; the name-dropping still seems excessive. Schazjmd (talk) 16:32, 19 October 2022 (UTC)Reply