Talk:Bridget Ogilvie

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Isobel.Isobel in topic Lead Section
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Lead Section

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The Lead section of this article was very short. I found the Lead section of this article to be relatively underwhelming, and I would say that it does not define the topic well or provide a concise overview of the topic. The Lead section does include a single introductory sentence that describes the articles topic, but it provides a very limited amount of information. Since the Lead section only includes a single introductory sentence, it does not include a brief description of the article's major sections, and would benefit from this addition of this description. One positive aspect of the Lead section is that is does not include any extraneous information that is not present in the article and it is concisely worded; however, the Lead section must include more information in order to provide a better overview of the topic. The only information presented in the Lead section is Ogilvie's nationality and the fact that she is a scientist. I would recommend adding a sentence or two about her research and accomplishments. Isobel.Isobel (talk) 21:52, 12 April 2021 (UTC)Reply