Talk:Brix Tavern/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 04:50, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Will review this article. GeraldWL 04:50, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Menu

• "with maple sausage, Eggs Benedict, shrimp and grits, mimosas..." Mimosa the flower? Um.... GeraldWL 04:53, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

   Fixed ---Another Believer _(Talk) 05:27, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

• "Thursdays it offers a three-course meal plus cocktail for $30..." Maybe "[On] Thursdays it offers a three-course meal plus cocktail for $30"? GeraldWL 04:57, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

   Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 05:28, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Events

• "For Nacho Week ... for $5" Maybe add an "as well" at the end? GeraldWL 05:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

   Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 05:28, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

• Assuming it refers to the 2020 Super Bowl, maybe link "2020" to Super Bowl LV? GeraldWL 05:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

  Linked to Super Bowl LIV ---Another Believer _(Talk) 05:29, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

• Link tater tots? GeraldWL 05:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

  Gerald Waldo Luis, The phrase is linked before the parenthesis. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 05:30, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Reception

• Link brownie? GeraldWL 05:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

   Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 05:30, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

• Second sentence has ref. 6 and 25. Ref. 6 has been used on previous sentence. Maybe remove one of them? GeraldWL 05:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

  I prefer to keep the actual Oregonian review article as well as the Eater Portland summary of the Oregonian review, if you don't mind. I think the summary is nice, and I based mine on the Eater source. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 05:35, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

  Another Believer, I relocated the ref to the statement that requires it, see if you find it fine. GeraldWL 05:56, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

  Sure! Thanks, ---Another Believer _(Talk) 05:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

• "few remaining places in Portland offering refillable mimosas..." What do you mean? 👁👄👁 GeraldWL 05:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

  Bottomless mimosas are when they keep bringing you drinks! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 05:32, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

• "Brix cracked our list of Favorite 5 Sports Bars due to its rarified Pearl Dist" Maybe "Pearl Dis[trict]" and remove the following dot? GeraldWL 05:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

   Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 05:33, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Images

All images are relevant, and have appropriate captions, with alt text (I put it), and one has a fair use rationale. We'll wait for a bot to reduce it. GeraldWL 06:07, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Overall

• Does it comply with the Manual of Style?
  • Seems like a Yes to me.
• Is it written and structured in a neutral fashion?
  • Seems like a Yes to me.
• Stable?
  • Uh-huh.
• Broad and focused on the resto?
  • It's all 'bout the resto.
• Pass or fail?
  •  On hold until the image is reduced. GeraldWL 06:07, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

    Gerald Waldo Luis,  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:48, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

    • Annd from there it has passed. GeraldWL 06:24, 5 December 2020 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.