Talk:Broken World (Millennium)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 00:01, 12 May 2012 (UTC)

• Plot: Since Millennium is American, I think 'organisation' should be spelled 'organization'. Stupid English differences.
  • Fixed; force of habit. GRAPPLE X 02:26, 12 May 2012 (UTC)
• Plot: Maybe use "slaughterhouse" instead of "abbatoir" (although, I like abbatoir better. Maybe just wikilink it)
  • Link would just redirect to slaughterhouse, do you want me to pipe it or just change it to slaughterhouse?
• Production: Maybe at the end of the Nietsche lie, cite the episode itself, too (Gotta love an episode that you can stick a Nietsche reference in, it makes me feel smarter when I read it!)
  • Not sure if there's much use citing the episode in an article about that episode, but I'll have another look in case I can find a source which helps. This fan site lists things like that but I'm not sure it would count as reliable (site seems solely run by two staff so there's no editorial oversight but at the same time it might then venture into expert SPS territory. I might bring it up on WP:RSN to see if it would be reliable enough to cite things like episode credits or those quotations). GRAPPLE X 02:26, 12 May 2012 (UTC)
• Broadcast: I assume no ratings info? I'll try to find some.
  • Nah, couldn't find any. Highbeam is pretty selective about it, it seems, has some weeks but not others (though any I have found have all come from the same paper, the Rocky Mountain News). GRAPPLE X 02:26, 12 May 2012 (UTC)
• Broadcast: I'd link Deus ex machina
  • Done, and added a sic template since the review had spelt it wrong. GRAPPLE X 02:26, 12 May 2012 (UTC)

Those are the only issues. On hold for seven days. Sorry for all the stupid links, I was feeling jovial when I reviewed this.Gen. Quon (talk) 00:15, 12 May 2012 (UTC)

• Have addressed a few of those issues, working to see what I can do about another. Also, I've only seen one episode of Conchords but it was brilliant (Love Is a Weapon of Choice). GRAPPLE X 02:26, 12 May 2012 (UTC)
  • I'd just use slaughterhouse I guess. I suppose its more easier to understand, even though I like the word "abbatoir" better. As for the Nietshce, don't worry about, I think you're fine. Also, I'll add ratings info ASAP. BTW, I highly recommend "Flight of the Conchords". The humor is pretty much always top-notch, but really dry.--Gen. Quon (talk) 02:35, 12 May 2012 (UTC)
    • Thanks for digging that info up, I really appreciate it. I've changed "abbatoir" to "slaughterhouse", and I'll definitely keep an eye out for Flight of the Conchords coming on again. I did dig the music they did for The Muppets, I have to say. Think that might just have been one of them though. GRAPPLE X 03:06, 12 May 2012 (UTC)
      • I think it was just one of them, but still, that's the quality of music. Anyway, this looks good now. I pass.--Gen. Quon (talk) 04:40, 12 May 2012 (UTC)