Talk:Brooklyn Street Circuit
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Bcschneider53 in topic GA Review
Brooklyn Street Circuit has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: June 24, 2018. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 17:48, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 17:48, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
- File:New York ePrix street circuit.jpg seems like a better picture of the track layout than the current one, but that's just me.
- I am 110% sure that image is a copyvio taken off the Formula E website. Tdorante10 (talk) 04:50, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- Oh, good point. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:23, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- I am 110% sure that image is a copyvio taken off the Formula E website. Tdorante10 (talk) 04:50, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- This offers some info on NASCAR in NYC.
- It also includes environmental and political causes for the Staten Island track not being built.
- I agree there should be clarification for the downfall of the Staten Island track, although I think it should be brief and more detail(s) should be in a separate article or added to the existing blurb in the International Speedway Corporation. Nonetheless, I will work on it. Tdorante10 (talk) 05:14, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- Done and more. Tdorante10 (talk) 11:27, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- I agree there should be clarification for the downfall of the Staten Island track, although I think it should be brief and more detail(s) should be in a separate article or added to the existing blurb in the International Speedway Corporation. Nonetheless, I will work on it. Tdorante10 (talk) 05:14, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- It also includes environmental and political causes for the Staten Island track not being built.
- "temporary and permanent structures for the race" For example?
- The example was the guard house. I will clarify. Tdorante10 (talk) 05:14, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- Done. Tdorante10 (talk) 11:27, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- The example was the guard house. I will clarify. Tdorante10 (talk) 05:14, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- "Bird won the second race of the weekend on July 16. After July 16, the track was taken apart." Merge the two sentences.
- Done. Tdorante10 (talk) 04:50, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- A small mention of previous races in the lead would be nice.
- Previous races in the New York area, or previous Formula E races? Tdorante10 (talk) 04:50, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- The former, the latter hasn't happened yet. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:23, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- Done. Tdorante10 (talk) 11:27, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- The former, the latter hasn't happened yet. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:23, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- Previous races in the New York area, or previous Formula E races? Tdorante10 (talk) 04:50, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
Almost perfect article. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:38, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- @Nova Crystallis: Thank you for the review, and thank you, Tdorante10, for stepping in and fixing these minor issues. (I had almost forgotten I had this at GAN; it's been so long!) --Bcschneider53 (talk) 11:30, 24 June 2018 (UTC)