Talk:Brown Memorial Presbyterian Church/GA
Latest comment: 16 years ago by StAnselm
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GA Review
Having reviewed the article, I can suggest four areas of improvement.
- The captions for the Maltbie Babcock and John Walker pictures could be expanded with a short explanation of who they are. E.g. Rev. Maltbie D. Babcock, second minister of Brown Memorial Presbyterian Church, and author of the hymn, "This is My Father's World."
- A table of the ministers would be of great help, and would smooth out the history section. "Rev. Ian Wilson was then called to the pulpit in 1968" sounds a little awkward.
- Strangely, there seems to be no mention of the first minister of the church. Surely one of the references mention him. His inclusion is obviously highly desirable.
- The section on the windows needs to be extensively wiki-linked. Several of the themes have their own articles - e.g. Lead, Kindly Light and Baptism of Jesus.
I hope this all helps. StAnselm (talk) 11:32, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
Fixed This is a big help. Thanks very much for taking the time to review the article and for your thoughtful comments. I've gone thru and implemented these suggestions. Let me know if this looks OK now. JGHowes talk - 21:24, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- The above issues having been fixed, I was delighted to approve this article for GA status. StAnselm (talk) 22:55, 8 April 2008 (UTC)