Talk:Brownsea Castle/GA1

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Hchc2009 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:11, 30 July 2015 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:11, 30 July 2015 (UTC)Reply

Sorry for the delay, changes made as per below. Cheers! Hchc2009 (talk) 16:34, 11 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
  • One DAB, external links good.
    • Still have DAB to greenhouse.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • it was in a very poor condition This maybe a Britishism, but "a" very poor condition reads oddly to me.
  • I think it is BritEng thing - I've done a quick Google, and it's not just me! ;)
  • 4 feet (1.2 m) high Remember how to format the template for the adjectival form from my last review of yours?
  • the ferrying rits in 1581 typo, I think.
  • What's the connection between Charles Sturt and the Napoleonic Wars?
I've clarified a bit more, but the source was unclear about what he was actually doing in it. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:34, 11 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
It should be Jacobethan (I can't see Jacobethean) - the wikilink gives some more background on it. It refers to a mock form of Jacobean. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:34, 11 August 2015 (UTC)Reply