Talk:Bukit Panjang MRT/LRT station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:06, 3 September 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• Lead tells us where it's "located" twice, I understand why but the repeat of "is located" is jarring.
  •  Fixed
• "the Downtown line station" use the abbreviation.
  •  Fixed
• BP6 and DT1 are noted in the infobox but not explained or referenced anywhere.
  •  Fixed in station details services subsection--ZKang123 (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
• "with the artwork" reads odd. Either remove "the" or explain more about what "the" artwork is.
  •  Fixed Added more details.--ZKang123 (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
• "Bus, Taxi" no need for capital T.
  •  Fixed
• BPLRT why isn't it BPLRTL i.e. with an L for line, like DTL?
  • Its the official LTA abbreviation, as seen here and here.--ZKang123 (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
• "The station opened..." avoid single-sentence paragraphs.
  •  Fixed
• "10,000 regular" avoid starting sentences with numbers.
  •  Fixed
• No information about the construction? Just straight in with when it opened, seems incomplete.
  • There are very little accessible details regarding the construction of the BPLRT. But I can probably still say when the line was first announced (will check a few sources later).--ZKang123 (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
    •  Fixed Added news source.--ZKang123 (talk) 13:55, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
• "failure on the evening of 29 August 2001" -> "failure the previous evening" would suffice.
  •  Fixed
• "at 10:15 am later that day" it wasn't later that day, it was the following day.
  •  Fixed rephrased entire section to make it more chronological.--ZKang123 (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
• " Half-Height Platform Barriers were installed on the LRT Platforms. " why all the capitalisation?
  •  Fixed removed capitalisation
• "Downtown Line" suddenly a capital L for line?
  •  Fixed
• Image captions are fragments so don't need full stops.
  •  Fixed
• "When questioned" by whom?
  •  Fixed the public (letters sent to LTA)--ZKang123 (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
• " the Downtown line trains" use the abbreviation.
  •  Fixed
• "The Contract 912 for" no need for The.
  •  Fixed
• " S$452.4 million" translate into something like US$
  •  Fixed
• "massive" bit POV.
  •  Fixed
• "work for Downtown line 2 is being carried out" was
  •  Fixed
• " construction site for the Downtown line in the" use the abbreviation.
  •  Fixed
• What happened to the sinkhole? You move quickly onto a fire.
  •  Fixed Added update.--ZKang123 (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
• "opened on 9 February 2018" why late?
  •  Fixed Explained.--ZKang123 (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
• "The artwork showcases an impressive row of tall HDB... " sounds like a guidebook.
  •  Fixed
• " ranges between" range, frequencies is plural.
  •  Fixed
• "The DTL station is not directly connected " it feels like this is the third time I've read this.
  •  Fixed
• "station is[28][29] " something missing.
  •  Fixed removed.--ZKang123 (talk)
• Spaced hyphens in ref titles need to be en-dashes.
  •  Fixed –ZKang123 (talk) 13:55, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
• Ref 4 is tagged as dead.
  •  Fixed
• Compare ref 7 and 8, The Straits Times is a work.
  •  Fixed
• Some sources you have LTA, others you have www.lta.gov.sg, aren't they one and the same?
  •  Fixed
• I also see eresources.nlb.gov.sg where previously that was www.lta.gov.sg.
  • If you are talking about ref 31, that because that is from infopedia, not LTA.--ZKang123 (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
• Ref 25 missing access and/or publication date.
  •  Fixed

That's it, on hold. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 09:06, 3 September 2020 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: any further updates on this?--ZKang123 (talk) 11:40, 9 September 2020 (UTC)

All is just swell, I've promoted. Nice work. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 12:17, 9 September 2020 (UTC)