Talk:Bulleit Bourbon/Archives/2021

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Maxcatwiki in topic Review requested


Review requested

(Copied from my talk page)

Ravensfire, Thanks for the reply and information. I have updated my page with my payment disclosure. I did notice that someone else has just made an edit to this page, most likely trying to improve that section, but provides false information (i.e., that Hollis B worked for Diageo for 25 years whereas she only worked for Diageo from 2006-2016) and that third sentence ("Hollis has since changed her name to Hollis B Worth, and writes about her experiences on her website.[12]") is refering to her "experiences" and using a citation that is merely a link to her personal webpage. I don't understand how this is appropriate for the Bulleit Bourbon wikipedia page, and not simply promoting her own self-interest. Your thoughts? Many thanks, — Preceding unsigned comment added by Maxcatwiki (talkcontribs) 19:02, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Maxcatwiki, I'm going to copy this to the article talk page, as it's the most relevant there. Someone will need to review what's in the source to verify what's in the article. WP:BLP1E is a relevant policy, where someone is notable because of one thing, so rather than have a separate page, there can be a slight expansion about the person on that one page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ravensfire (talkcontribs) 14:00, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
meh, I'm not bothered about that second sentence, I mostly edited trying to cut the most egregious soapboxing out but obviously didn't have a good view of what remained, so you're right. Trimmed it down to just the sentence that's sourced by the sfgate article. Steering clear of the personal website as a ref seems like a wise thing to do, having just visited it and seen the tone of it... I'm afraid I can't help you with the 25 vs 10 years thing, as that's what the source says (unless you have an alternative source?) EditorInTheRye (talk) 15:15, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
Thanks for taking that out. I have updated with the correct amount of time Hollis worked for Diageo and cited source for that. Thanks again, Maxcatwiki (talk) 21:06, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
Co-incidentally, I created this page in 2008 after I noticed that a whiskey on my shelf didn't have an article, and haven't checked back until I made that that edit - nice to see how it's progressed :-) EditorInTheRye (talk) 15:18, 29 March 2021 (UTC)