Talk:Burch High School

Latest comment: 1 year ago by 2607:FB91:BD95:C44:49AB:2D9F:22DB:CCBC in topic Who was the first blk woman to go to this school.

Minor edits to the page

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Thought I'd post comments to my minor edits to this page. I'm in California, so I have no prior interest in this school.

I'm a child of the AP Style Guide, so I adjusted the hyphenation used in the original and generally smoothed syntax. I felt that the opening para was weak and punched it up a bit. I'm unsure of the reference to third-class and etc. in the original article... this may be local legal usage, so I didn't change that. I might have used Class-1, Class-2... etc.

Since it is not my place to do original research here, I respectfully suggest to the original writer (if listening) that they identify the class valedictorian referenced if possible, since this seems to come from a more detailed history. Leaving him unknown is very unsatisfying to the reader and possibly unfair to him and his family if they still live in the area.

Angeleum-II (talk) 06:54, 11 October 2013 (UTC)Reply

Minor update to first graduating class information

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I added the name of the valedictorian as suggested by Angeleum-II (thanks for your edits), and a list of the names of the first graduates and what they became. I didn't have that information, but found it by chance while researching my family history and it turns out my great uncle was the valedictorian.

Nivlacian (talk) 05:00, 23 October 2013 (UTC)Reply

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Who was the first blk woman to go to this school.

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who was the first blk woman to attend this school? 2607:FB91:BD95:C44:49AB:2D9F:22DB:CCBC (talk) 02:33, 24 August 2023 (UTC)Reply