Talk:Burning Up (Madonna song)/GA1

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OK, I will begin now and likely make some straightforward copyediting changes as I go. Please feel free to revert any that inadvertently change the meaning. Casliber (talk · contribs) 05:35, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

• Lucas also re-invented them thereby changing their structure from the original demo versions. - do you think the "reinvented" is important? Does it make for more impact than "Lucas radically changed their structure from the original demo versions."

Changed to radically changed.

• PS: Any further details on how the song was changed by Lucas, and then by Benitez would be great - i.e. describing how the original version sounded compared with what we heard on the radio.

I tried finding for any further details, but only got that Jellybean included a guitar riff, that is already added.

• Madonna was almost a professional by that time.. - not sure what this is supposed to mean, she was about to or had already given up her day job?

Added professional performer.

• I remember the 12" being played a bit, yet is not really mentioned in the body of the text.

Billboard did not have any information regarding the 12" bit, nor did any of the books.

• Finally, has the song been used in any other film or commercial etc. And has it been covered by anyone else?

Covered during Madonna's induction to Rock and Roll, added in article. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 06:17, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

To sum up Nearly there - some minor fixes above and we're over the line Casliber (talk · contribs) 06:04, 24 July 2009 (UTC)