Talk:Business School (The Office)/GA1

GA Review

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• Rename "Plot synopsis" to Plot
• "The Office—the show's" → "The Office and the show's"
• """Business School" was" → ""'Business School' was" (single quotes)
• "# ^ Gone Batty Entertainment Weekly, retrieved June 24, 2008" – the date is italicized here?
• ""I got to the set and saw Pam's art, and I was like, "This is not right."" – missing a quote

Gary King (talk) 19:32, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

I've completed your requests. Mastrchf (^t/_c) 20:58, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Passing Gary King (talk) 21:12, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. Mastrchf (^t/_c) 21:53, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

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