Talk:Business routes of Interstate 94 in Michigan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 03:01, 6 August 2015 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

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1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   The sentence "On the western edge of downtown Jackson, traffic to follow a one-way pairing of streets that form a loop around the downtown area." is poorly worded.

   • "The US 12 bypass of Jackson was partially completed in late 1951 or early.", missing date here.
   • When describing the changes to the Jackson business route in 1969, you use present tense. Past tense should be used here since you are describing a past event.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   • Do you think you can add lane counts for the business routes?
   • "it features an unusual intersection with Crystal Avenue which is constructed identically to a diamond interchange, albeit without a grade separation between BL I-94 and Crystal Avenue", this could be simplified to "it features an at-grade diamond interchange with Crystal Avenue to make it less wordy.
   • "On January 11, 2001. BL I-94 inside the city of Marshall was designated what is now called a Pure Michigan Byway.", maybe could refer to it as a Michigan Heritage Route as that was what the program was called when it was designated, so readers aren't left guessing what it was called before.
   • "BL I-94 departs the loop north of the Grand River crossing near the train station on Michigan Avenue.", maybe mention the railroad crossing (along with any others along the business routes) and indicate that this is an Amtrak station.
   • "Veterans Memorial Park. East of the mall", is the park supposed to be a "mall" (in the sense of a park not a shopping mall)? Otherwise, I would change mall to park.

   When BL I-94 was designated in Port Huron in 1986, did it replace a part of M-25? If so, this should be made more clear.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   It may help to have a map in the infobox showing where all the business routes of I-94 in Michigan are, but not required for this article to pass.

7. Overall:

I will place the article on hold for some fixes to be made. Dough4872 03:49, 6 August 2015 (UTC)

Everything except the lane counts has been added. They're coming up in the next edit, Dough4872, if you want to check the other stuff now. Imzadi 1979 → 04:20, 6 August 2015 (UTC)

@Dough4872: and those have been added. Imzadi 1979 → 05:54, 6 August 2015 (UTC)

And I will now pass the article. Dough4872 05:55, 6 August 2015 (UTC)