Talk:CSS General Earl Van Dorn/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 00:33, 7 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:53, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:53, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

• Images appropriately licensed
• Earwig 16%
• The conversion into warships for the River Defense Fleet vessels adding 1 inch (2.5 cm) of iron plating backed by 4 inches (10 cm) of oak planking Missing word?
• Link 32-pounder gun and tell readers that it was smoothbore muzzle loader
• Proximity alert for the ship's name in the first para of the Plumb Point Bend para. Mix up how you refer to the ship by using pronouns, etc.
• became ungrounded awkward
• Link salvaged
• Substitute barrier for blockade?

Mostly done. I'm still working on turning up a source that repeats the obvious claim that the 32-pounder was smoothbore and muzzle loading; everybody seems to view that as an understood fact. Hog Farm _Talk 02:48, 19 May 2024 (UTC)