Talk:Caleb Swanigan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 00:51, 4 April 2017 (UTC)

Reviewing later.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 00:51, 4 April 2017 (UTC)

Lead:

• "Swanigan originally committed to Michigan State, but later decommitted and committed to Purdue University." Shorten it to just "Purdue", or add "University" to the end of "Michigan State".
  • Done

Early life:

• His birth should be mentioned somewhere early in the section.
  • Done
• Use {{convert}} for the weights and heights mentioned.
  • Pretty sure I got them all, let me know if I missed one. Used height template instead, was more intuitive.

College career:

• The 2017 section needs to be updated for the end of the NCAA tournament.
  • We could just pretend it never happened. Just kidding, I wrote it.
• Gotta add this.
  • Yup, just came out, I'll add it. Haven't read this article yet, if it doesn't mention Swanigan's adoptive father is an agent I'll see if I can find something that ties the two together.
  • You know, I bet his father cannot do agent things. I read three articles and did not see a mention of it at all. So, this is now done.

Records:

• "records for career points (1,649) and rebounds (1048)," Comma needed for second number.
  • Done

Awards and honors:

• "Swanigan was also named the National Freshman of the Week." Any idea when he was named?
  • Done
• "Swanigan joins Lonzo Ball, Frank Mason, and Josh Hart." For what?
  • Rephrased those sentences

References:

• Some of the references are missing access dates.
  • Done
• References 12 and 28 can be expanded a bit more.
  • Done, unless they moved around and I missed them