Talk:Can't Be Tamed (song)/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Adabow in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 05:00, 14 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

Very good job, not many things to fix at all:

  • Throughout the article you use "Cyrus's", apostrophes after words ending in 's' don't need another 's' - ie just write "Cyrus'"

Background

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  • Source for writers/producers?

Critical reception

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  • "...that always helps.", McAlpine concluded. - remove full stop
  •   Done
  • Link 'Disney'
  •   Done

Music video

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  • Link 'choreographed'
  •   Done
  • "she didn't want them to wear scales and look too fish-like or too wear bird feet and look too scary." - rewrite
  •   Done
  • why do you link 'avis' (esp to a non-existent page)?
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  • 'Video reception' section should simply be 'Reception'
  •   Done

Track listings

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  • Sources?

Stability

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  Declined – Not enough recent disruptive activity to justify protection. per WP:GA? vandalism is not a GA impediment. TbhotchTalk C. 04:12, 15 November 2010 (UTC)Reply
OK, just a suggestion... Adabow (talk · contribs) 05:09, 15 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

Media

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I'll place the review on hold now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 05:26, 14 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

Apart from the track listing sources, everything has been addressed, so I am happy to pass it now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 00:26, 22 November 2010 (UTC)Reply