Talk:Candy Shop (Madonna song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:43, 29 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• and Pharrell Williams while production → comma before "while"
• carried out Madonna and Williams' production team → carried out by the singer and the latter's team
• July 2007 but was quickly → comma before "but"
• Link "pop" to pop music
• and R&B and the instrumentation of → and R&B, with its instrumentation consisting of
• Link "music critics" to music journalism
• and catchiness but → comma before "but"
• was certified platinum → was certified Platinum
• top-twenty → top 20

 Done

Infobox

• flawless ;)

Background and composition

• online but was quickly → comma before "but"
• song Madonna and Pharrell Williams worked → no full names here
• Williams recalled, "we → The latter recalled, "we
• songs; "I love → songs, "I love
• Link "pop" to pop music
• lyrically the song uses → the song lyrically uses
• Madonna sings "Come → comma after "sings"
• The lines "My sugar → comma after "lines"

 Done

Reception

• Link "music critics" to music journalism
• Allmusic → AllMusic
• praised its catchiness; "set to a → ; to ,
• Slant Magazine wrote: "Pharrell → : to ,
• Talia Soghomolian, from musicOMH, was → no comma
• review; "A couple → normal comma
• Helen Brown, from The Daily Telegraph, compared → no comma
• from Blender, called it a → no comma here
• certified platinum → certified Platinum

 Done

Live performances

• were recorded and released in Madonna's → "in" to "on"
• for party inspired → for party-inspired
• in Golden Twenties inspired → in Golden Twenties-inspired
• it on tour; "[her] obvious → ; to ,

 Done

Credits and personnel

• Unlink Madonna here

 Done

Charts and certifications

• flawless ;)

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 35.5% is acceptable!

Links

• No problems here!

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
• 2 dead links! Please fix!!

Outcome

•  On hold for 7 days! Good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:56, 30 December 2016 (UTC)
  • Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:39, 31 December 2016 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.