Talk:Capture of Grenada (1779)

Latest comment: 12 years ago by MathewTownsend in topic GA Review
Good articleCapture of Grenada (1779) has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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December 21, 2011Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 15:05, 20 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

I'll start this review shortly. Interesting topic! MathewTownsend (talk) 15:05, 20 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Review
  • Lede
  • Background
  • "augmenting the fleet of Admiral Samuel Barrington" - so he was already there? (I must have missed that.)
    • The Royal Navy had more-or-less permanent stations in the West Indies. I didn't think any specific reference this (or the arrival of its most recent commander) was particularly necessary. I've added words mentioning Barrington's post. Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • "the French at Martinique" - on Martinique? Fixed Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • "Governor the marquis de Bouillé" - looks funny. Should it be Governer François Claude Amour?
  • French capture
  • Aftermath
  • Caption
  • Everything else looks fine. A very clear, concise article.
  • I made a few copy edits that you are free to reverse.[1]

MathewTownsend (talk) 21:04, 20 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for taking the time to review; I think I've addressed your concerns. Let me know if not... Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
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    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Does it follow the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  
  • Your careful writing and presentation is much appreciated!

MathewTownsend (talk) 17:03, 21 December 2011 (UTC)Reply