Talk:Carex rosea

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You're off to a good start. It seems you have a good concept on your plant. I think you did a good job in the description and the conservation status. There were a couple things I noticed while reading. Under one heading you mentioned the plant grew mostly in Canada and then in the next heading (habitat and Distribution I believe it was) you mentioned it grew in the southern states in the United States. I might have read that wrong but you might want to go back and check. If so, just mention that it does also grow in Canada. The last couple citations were not correct. They just contained a URL, no author, date, or title. Make sure you correct that so you don't get in trouble with wikipedia. Lastly there was one spelling error that I saw, you put thought instead of though. There were some words in the description of the plant that I did not know or understand. If you could define those it would be perfect for the readers outside the class that know nothing about plants. Also, add a picture if you can. If you can figure out how let me know!! I tried and it said it couldn't add due to copyright laws. Maybe we can work on that together! I liked the fact you included the plant life, I think that would be a good thing to include in my article as well. Other than that I don't think there was anything else that was applicable for my article. I feel our plants are pretty different from one another. When I copied your article into word it said you only had 589 words, so definitely add length to that. In order for me to get my word count I added more headers. Once I found all the information on a specific header that I could I just made a new one. It helps with length along with a lot of sources.EnsleyHydroSib (talk) 04:40, 14 November 2016 (UTC)