Talk:Carly Pearce/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 04:08, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
Nominator: ChrisTofu11961 (talk · contribs) at 21:57, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

General

• Following terms are linked multiple times in the article. Suggesting to import this script. They should be linked only twice–once in the lead section, and once in the prose:
  • Grand Ole Opry
  • Bluegrass
  • Dollywood
  • Country Airplay
  • Alison Krauss
  • Trisha Yearwood
  • American Songwriter
  • Taste of Country

• • • Done. Also Dollywood is only linked twice (once in the overview and once in the prose).
      • No, these all are linked twice in the prose. Suggesting to import this script. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:55, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
        • Never mind, I'll fix this. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 11:32, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
          • Now done. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 11:35, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

Detailed

• her self-penned "Every Little Thing" found acclaim on satellite radio — can we rephrase to make it a bit more neutral?
  • Done
• Billboard Country Airplay — avoid linking two adjacent words
  • Done
• a high honor in the country music industry — not required to mention, at-least in the lead.
  • Oh I did not write that. I removed it.
• in Taylor Mill, Kentucky — Missing MOS:GEOCOMMA
  • Done.
• developed an interest — remove 'an'
  • Done.
• while she was a child — should be "during her childhood"
  • Done
• In home video — "In a home video"
  • Done
• Starting at age 11 — "Starting at age 11"
  • Done
• of bluegrass material in the lead v. a Bluegrass band — be consistent with capitalization.
  • Done
• The female producer Pearce — "The female producer Pearce "
  • Done
• I’ve — fix the quote marks (’ to ')
  • Done
• she met Pete Fisher who was — comma after 'Fisher'
  • Done
• Fisher was responsible for providing Pearce the opportunity to perform — "Fisher provided Pearce the opportunity to perform"
  • Done
• Thomas Rhett and Blake Shelton. — comma after "Rhett" (Oxford comma)
  • You mentioned this above. I believe I already fixed it.
• "Next Girl." — here, full stop should be outside quotes (I think, fell free to correct me)
  • Yup you're right.
• These events included her divorce from singer, Michael Ray — the article mentions her divorce before mentioning her marriage!
  • Ok, well I added the phrase "After taking time to marry singer Michael Ray..." under music career. It shouldn't go into more detail here until the reader gets to the "personal life" section.
• "in a place of hope.". — 2 full-stops.
  • Done
• of The Grand Ole Opry. — "of the Grand Ole Opry."
  • Done
• Ricky Skaggs and Rhonda Vincent — comma after "Skaggs"
  • Done
• Allmusic's — 'M' should be capital
  • Done
• Good Morning America — italics
  • Done
• '90s ... but, like, — add   after "'90s"
  • Not sure what you mean here?
    • I meant to add a non-breaking space after it. I have now done it. — Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 11:38, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
• That references in the "Ref." section should be center-aligned.
  • Done
• Few entries in "Tours" section need citations.

Images

• Image can take ALT text.
  • Thank you. I added it to the infobox.

References

• What makes the following sources reliable?
  • http://69.142.160.183/~dispenser/cgi-bin/altviewer.py?page=Carly_Pearce
    • You linked the image here. I am not understanding what you mean.
      • Sorry, it was just a copy-paste issue. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:53, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
  • https://www.instagram.com/accounts/login/ (Instagram??)
    • I didn't add the Instagram source and I didn't catch that originally. Thanks for checking. I removed it.
  • https://tasteofcountry.com/carly-pearce-album-interview/
  • https://tasteofcountry.com/carly-pearce-michael-ray-dating/
  • https://theboot.com/carly-pearce-closer-to-you-interview/
    • The Boot and Taste of Country are country music news media organizations. Writers are journalists (or sometimes freelance journalists) who have a college background in studying journalism. Artists often conduct interviews with these outlets before going to other media outlets.
• Inconsistency in linking media organization/website/work. Few are linked, few are not.
  • Only the websites/media/work that have Wikipedia articles I linked. I double-checked.
• Various instances of "Allmusic" should be changes to "AllMusic"
  • Fixed.
• In Ref#35, what does "3006705" mean?
  • This is the ID for the release of the compact disc. This is used to verify that Pearce did in fact release an album. Without the ID, it would not be considered a reliable source
    • Fine for me then. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:54, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
• Ref#63 and 64 doesn't has any publisher/website mentioned.
  • Ref 63 was not added by me and I could not find the original so I just deleted it. Ref 64 I added a new reference for.
• Check formatting and consistency of sources.

That is it. Putting on hold. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 14:35, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

@Kavyansh.Singh: I made changes based on your suggestions. Please see above. ChrisTofu11961 (talk) 17:50, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

Thanks! Passing!! Congrats for the GA!!! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 11:45, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

@Kavyansh.Singh: Thanks so much! ChrisTofu11961 (talk) 18:16, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

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