Talk:Carnegie railway station/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Bneu2013 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Bneu2013 (talk · contribs) 04:02, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
Will be reviewing. Comments coming soon. Bneu2013 (talk) 04:02, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
- Update - after further analysis, I don't think this article is ready. The biggest issue is that it doesn't appear to meet criteria 3a. For example, for a nearly 150 year old station, there is very little mentioned in the way of the station's history. The description of the station is rather short too. I would recommend taking a look at other railway station GAs, such as Brooklyn Bridge–City Hall/Chambers Street station, which I just reviewed. While this is a much larger station, it should give you an idea of the kinds of additions you should consider. Bneu2013 (talk) 04:33, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
- Infobox and lead
Carnegie railway station is a commuter railway station located in the suburb of Carnegie, in the southeastern suburbs of Melbourne, Victoria, Australia.
- suggest rewording to something like "Carnegie railway station is a commuter railway station located in Carnegie, a southeastern suburb of Melbourne, Victoria, Australia."
- Is there any reason why all four bus routes are not named in the lead?
- Spell out "Flinders Street railway station" in the last lead sentence.
- Description
- Different figures of the distance to the Flinders Street station than those in the lead.
- Combine second and third paragraphs.
- History
- Any information on the pre-construction background of this station?
- When did construction begin?
- Surely there were other changes and renovations that took place between 1879 and the present that are worth mentioning?
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