Talk:Carré d'As IV incident/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 20:38, 3 August 2016 (UTC)

Nothing major:

• A few duplicate links - if you don't have it, there's a tool you can install here that will help you find them.
• I don't know that you need to specify that Sarkozy was "the then-President" - I imagine it should be clear that he was the president at the time, not before or after the incident.
• Link Royal Marines in the caption (and maybe specify that they're British
• Additional useful links would be Mast (sailing), rocket launcher (I'd assume an RPG-7, but your sources may not be that specific) assault rifle (presumably an AKM of some variety, but again, the sources probably don't specify)
• Convert the metric lengths of the vessels mentioned in the article
• La Fayette-class frigate - the "La Fayette" bit should be italicized (you can use the {{sclass-}} template to avoid unnecessary piping - {{Sclass|La Fayette|frigate|1}} produces La Fayette-class frigate. Parsecboy (talk) 20:38, 3 August 2016 (UTC)

@Parsecboy: Thank you for your helpful suggestions, all of them have been  Done. GAB^gab 21:25, 3 August 2016 (UTC)

Everything looks good to me, nice work. Parsecboy (talk) 20:12, 4 August 2016 (UTC)