Talk:Carrie Goldberg/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Mike Christie in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 14:49, 14 August 2022 (UTC)Reply


I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 14:49, 14 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

  • I can't see how File:Carrie Goldberg, Netizens trailer, Jewish Film Institute.jpg is licensed as CC 1.0, as the tag says. I'm not expert on image policy, but I would have expected to see a link to the source and some way to determine that the image had been released under that license.
  • You cite a couple of things to Salon; per WP:RSP it's a dubious source. I would suggest at a minimum attributing inline, or perhaps cutting it.
  • Your link to The Cut in the citations goes to the wrong magazine; it should go here.
  • "Goldberg experienced significant sexual violence as a young adult": she was 36 or so at the time she was raped, so I would suggest making this "in her thirties"; I wouldn't think "young adult" connotes anything older than early- or mid-twenties.
    • Hmm, not sure what I meant when I wrote this but there's the multiple rapes in her 30s and the workplace violence when she was at college, so I've just eliminated the age reference. — Bilorv (talk) 11:37, 15 August 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • "psychos", "stalkers", "pervs", and "trolls": I would make this a single quote, since it's taken consecutively from her book's title.
  • Do we know the outcome of Cline's countersuit against Reetz-Laiolo?
  • Under "Political advocacy" we mention a New York bill but say nothing about whether Goldberg supported it or helped write it.

-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:24, 14 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the feedback, Mike Christie! Let me know what remains to be done. — Bilorv (talk) 11:37, 15 August 2022 (UTC)Reply
Fixes look good; passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 12:15, 15 August 2022 (UTC)Reply