Talk:Carrie Goldberg/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Mike Christie in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 14:49, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 14:49, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
I can't see how File:Carrie Goldberg, Netizens trailer, Jewish Film Institute.jpg is licensed as CC 1.0, as the tag says. I'm not expert on image policy, but I would have expected to see a link to the source and some way to determine that the image had been released under that license.- commons:File:Carrie Goldberg, Netizens trailer, Jewish Film Institute.jpg gives the source as Vimeo and I've just added a timestamp, 1:26, from which the frame is taken. On my view of Vimeo, if you click the "More" button next to the "4 years ago" publication date, you can see a CC0 symbol and hover over it to read the public domain declaration release. — Bilorv (talk) 11:37, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
You cite a couple of things to Salon; per WP:RSP it's a dubious source. I would suggest at a minimum attributing inline, or perhaps cutting it.- The other sources in the paragraph verify most of it anyway, but added Nobody's Victim to plug in the gaps and add a couple of dates. — Bilorv (talk) 11:37, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
Your link to The Cut in the citations goes to the wrong magazine; it should go here.- Good spot—now fixed. — Bilorv (talk) 11:37, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
"Goldberg experienced significant sexual violence as a young adult": she was 36 or so at the time she was raped, so I would suggest making this "in her thirties"; I wouldn't think "young adult" connotes anything older than early- or mid-twenties.- Hmm, not sure what I meant when I wrote this but there's the multiple rapes in her 30s and the workplace violence when she was at college, so I've just eliminated the age reference. — Bilorv (talk) 11:37, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
"psychos", "stalkers", "pervs", and "trolls"
: I would make this a single quote, since it's taken consecutively from her book's title.- Done. — Bilorv (talk) 11:37, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
Do we know the outcome of Cline's countersuit against Reetz-Laiolo?- No I can't find anything, if there has been an outcome. — Bilorv (talk) 11:37, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
Under "Political advocacy" we mention a New York bill but say nothing about whether Goldberg supported it or helped write it.- Now
For instance, she worked on a New York bill criminalizing revenge porn that passed in 2019
, which I assume is the passage you're referring to. — Bilorv (talk) 11:37, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
- Now
-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:24, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks for the feedback, Mike Christie! Let me know what remains to be done. — Bilorv (talk) 11:37, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
- Fixes look good; passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 12:15, 15 August 2022 (UTC)