Talk:Carry Me in Your Dreams/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 19:28, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

• Alt has to be more descriptive than that, as its an alternative descprition of the cover.
• The german source also claims the track is an "electronic disco song" → genre

Lead

• Kejsi Tola. It was independently released as a single → Kejsi Tola, independently released as a single
• The song → It
• English-language up-tempo electronic French pop-inspired song → see below for the changes according to the compostion section
• with the song's Albanian-language version → with the Albanian-language version
• she was accompanied → and was accompanied

Background and composition

• Unwikilink up-tempo + uptempo
• French pop → 70's french pop (stick to the source)
• Musically, the latter is an English-language up-tempo electronic French pop-inspired song that incorporates folk elements.[1][3][4] → Musically, the latter is an English-language uptempo electronic and disco song.[1][3] It was inspired by the 70's french pop and incorporates folk elements.[4]
• This section can and should contain more information regarding its instrumentation, voice of the singer and much more. Source 3 and 4 are quite compreenshive on that matter. Such as "schlager rhythms and key change" and "psychedelic turbo-folk production ", among other instances

Release and promotion

• premiered prior to the start of the Eurovision Song Contest 2009 → be more specific regarding the date

Festivali i Këngës

• which included Tola being chosen to represent the country in the contest, after gathering the maximal votes from a expert jury of 126 points. → . Tola was chosen to represent the country in the contest, after gathering the maximum votes, 126 points, from an expert jury.

Moscow

• Fine

Track listing

• Fine

Release history

• Fine

References

• Fine

Overall

• Critical reception?

You should mention Borislava and Costa from the same review. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:20, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: Done.--Lorik17 (talk) 19:37, 15 May 2020 (UTC)

• The sources for the single release only have the year, no month or date?

The 1 January 2008 is displayed on the iTunes App on the Phone .. Let me know if its not suitable to use the date.--Lorik17 (talk) 17:06, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

You have to provide me the source that has that date. Can't you find it anywhere else? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:11, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

Unfortunately, it is only visible on Phone but i can remove "1 January"?--Lorik17 (talk) 17:15, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

You have to. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:20, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

• You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:29, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I made the changes you've requested. I also added a Critical reception section--Lorik17 (talk) 17:06, 14 May 2020 (UTC)