Talk:Cary Kochman

External links in article body

In accordance with Wikipedia policy, I have removed the external links embedded in the article body. Twice now actually, after they recently reappeared. I would just say as a friendly reminder, Wikipedia articles may include links to web pages outside Wikipedia (external links), but they should not normally be placed in the body of an article. Please see WP:External links. (Belshay (talk) 17:55, 27 April 2016 (UTC))

External links modified

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Re-structuring suggested

This article should not have an "advisory experience" sub-sectio. Important content in that section would be better suited if it were merged into the main section discussing his carwer. separate from the section on his career.

Also, the content currently "advisory experience" section is writtrn in descending chronological order. This should be changed. It should instead be in ascending order (earliest to most recent). SecretName101 (talk) 03:40, 7 July 2018 (UTC)

Any important content currently located under "Memberships and organizations" (a rather unusual header for a BLP section) should probably instead be located in a "personal life" section or a "philanthrophy" sub-section. SecretName101 (talk) 03:44, 7 July 2018 (UTC)

Also, there a ton of links missing. Each (initial) mention of major corporations with Wikipedia pages of their own should probably have links to their articles. SecretName101 (talk) 03:51, 7 July 2018 (UTC)