Talk:Caspian expeditions of the Rus'

Latest comment: 7 months ago by McLennonSon in topic I have some problems with the introduction
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that during one of the Caspian expeditions of the Rus, the city of Barda in Azerbaijan was saved from complete destruction only by an outbreak of dysentery among the Rus?
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I have some problems with the introduction

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The second sentence "Initially, the Rus' appeared in Serkland[...]" irks me, because given the context, Serkland appears to have nothing with the Rus', or anything established in the first sentence, and Serkland is a norse exonym. I don't really know how to fix the sentence but it threw me off. Also, as far as I know, what Serkland IS isn't really established -- ––Ellie (McLennonSon) 00:56, 6 April 2024 (UTC)Reply