Talk:Cave Junction, Oregon/GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Peregrine Fisher in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Hi, I am reviewing this article for GA. I have been through the article and copy edited a little. In a few places I changed the wording for clarity or to reflect the sources more clearly. I added – for ranges, per MoS. The article is good, and as I know the area, interesting. I have one comment at this point. —Mattisse (Talk) 01:32, 3 February 2009 (UTC)Reply

Comments
  • I think the "Wine" section is given undue weight in the article. It is the longest, by far of all the sections under "Culture", more so than "Historical sites" and "Sports and recreation".
  • I notice on the talk page that someone mentioned "Geology". The area is very interesting geologically and since you mention the gold and the Oregon Caves National Monument you might be able to work in something about the geology. (I see your comment that it would not work in the article, and that may be true.)

Mattisse (Talk) 01:32, 3 February 2009 (UTC)Reply

    • I adjustedd the wine section. I kind of a had a mini article for Foris Vineyards shoehorned into the CJ article. I spun it out and left a summary.
    • I'd like to leave out the geology stuff. I think it's a bit to technical to warrant inclusion. I've searched pretty hard for more layman terms info unsuccessfully. If it's a sticking point, I can try some more. - Peregrine Fisher (talk) (contribs) 01:55, 3 February 2009 (UTC)Reply
  • I go frequently to the country north and west of Eagles Point, not far from the Rogue River. Its in the mountains and there are a variety igneous rocks in the creek beds and Indian artifacts. It is magical. —Mattisse (Talk) 02:25, 3 February 2009 (UTC)Reply
Comment

Final GA review (see here for criteria)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): Well written   b (MoS): Follows MoS  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): Well referenced   b (citations to reliable sources): Sources are reliable   c (OR): No OR  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): Sets the context   b (focused): Remains focused on subject  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias: NPOV  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Congraduations! Good work. —Mattisse (Talk) 04:28, 3 February 2009 (UTC)Reply

Thank you, and especially thanks for the copyedit. - Peregrine Fisher (talk) (contribs) 04:35, 3 February 2009 (UTC)Reply