Talk:Cayman Islands at the 2014 Winter Olympics

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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Cayman Islands at the 2014 Winter Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 21:24, 12 July 2018 (UTC)Reply


QPQ. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:24, 12 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • "Alpine skier Dow Travers was again the only athlete. The delegation also consisted of four officials. Travers failed to complete either of his events." Merge to "The Caymanian delegation consisted of four officials and one athlete, alpine skier Dow Travers, who failed to complete either of his events."
  • Might as well mention the names of the three other officials in the background section.
  • "The Cayman Islands" Lowercase "the".
  • "Travers injured himself in training about a month before the Games. The injury required stitches and kept him off his skis for around ten days." -> "Travers injured himself in training about a month before the games, and his injury required stitches and kept him off his skis for around ten days."
  • "however, he failed" Change to "but he failed".

A few things. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 22:59, 12 July 2018 (UTC)Reply