Talk:Celebrity (album)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:07, 14 October 2020 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Soon --K. Peake 17:07, 14 October 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Too many producers in the infobox per Template:Infobox album

There does not seem to be a main producer for the album as several producers worked on different songs. Maybe I should just list recurring producers or remove the parameter altogether? — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "album to be recorded by American boy band" → "album by American boy band"

Changed sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• The released part should be its own sentence

Separated sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "the band were not" → "that they were not"

Fixed — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "as well as expectations..." this bit is not backed up in the body, it only states about the sales of the album in the background section near the criticism

Removed sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "As with No Strings Attached," → "As with their previous studio album, No Strings Attached (2000)," with the wikilink

Changed sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "and The Neptunes," → "and the Neptunes," per MOS:THEMUSIC

Fixed — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "were also involved with production, co-writing" → "also contributed to production, while they co-wrote"

Changed sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "to develop the album's unique sound," → "to develop a unique sound,"

Changed sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "After twice being delayed..." only see one delay in the body; can you point out where the other is because I seem to be missing it?

Fixed, must have been combined with they delay of the PopOdyssey tour. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "released to a generally favorable reception by" → "released to generally favorable reviews from"

Changed sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "Celebrity was the band's" → "The album was the band's"

Changed sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "selling 1,879,495 copies in the US in its first week," → "with first week sales of 1,879,495 copies in the US,"

Changed sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "which was the second-best debut-week sales" → "which became the second-best debut week sales"

Changed sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "in 2001 after" → "in 2001, after"

Added comma — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "and was certified quintuple platinum" → "and has since been certified quintuple platinum in the US"

Changed sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "on the PopOdyssey and Celebrity tours to promote the album." → "on the accompanying PopOdyssey and Celebrity tours for promotion."

Replaced sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "The release date of..." this is trivial for the lead

Removed sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Background

• Retitle to Background and development

Retitled section — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 09:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Remove wikilink on NSYNC

Removed wikilink — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 09:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "10 of 13 songs" → "10 of 13 songs on the album" on the img main text

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 09:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "in January and February 2001." → "during January and February of 2001."

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 09:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "ideas while Joey Fatone stated the group" → "ideas, while Joey Fatone stated that they"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 09:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "The band also said they wanted to work" → "NSYNC also said they wanted to collaborate"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 09:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "in the US during the first week," → "in the United States during its first week,"

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 09:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "ridiculed the group, which did" → "ridiculed the band, who did"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 09:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "In response, NSYNC" → "In response to this, NSYNC"

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 09:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "10 of the album's 13 tracks." → "10 of the 13 tracks on Celebrity."

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 09:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Isn't the RS ref the one that backs up the above sentence?

Both state similar sentences but Rolling Stone only indicated that they wrote 80% of the album. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 09:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "and music, Lance Bass was" → "and music, while Lance Bass was"

Added word — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 09:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "while Fatone and Chris Kirkpatrick started to plan the album's supporting tour." → "and Fatone started to plan the supporting tour alongside Chris Kirkpatrick."

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 09:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Recording and production

• "to their sound." → "to their sound for Celebrity."

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "with the group when" → "with the band when"

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "late 2000 because their styles" → "late 2000, as their styles"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "stating "If you" → "stating: "If you"

Added colon — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "I'll do it"." → "I'll do it."" since this is a full sentence

Moved quotation — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "used equipment that is usually used" → "tried 40 different treatments for vocals, with him using equipment that is commonly used" since the treatments part is notable

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "effects and constantly shouted" → "effects, and he constantly shouted"

Fixed grammar — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "BT wanted to ensure..." does say about him changing it, but where does the ref mention him ensuring to do so?

Removed part about ensuring, kept remaining sentence intact. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "second single "Gone" was" → "second single, "Gone", was" with the target

Added wikilinks — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "and Michael Jackson but was declined by Jackson." → "and Jackson, but was declined by the latter of the two."

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "as a duet with Timberlake but the band" → "as a duet between himself and Timberlake, but NSYNC"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "The Neptunes were engaged" → "American production duo the Neptunes became engaged" per MOS:THEMUSIC

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "the album's third single" → "Celebrity's third single"

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Introduce who Stevie Wonder is

Added introductory sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "with Robin Wiley." → "with his songwriting partner Robin Wiley."

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "which Timberlake described" → "with Timberlake describing his presence"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:10, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Composition and lyrical content

• "several musical genres including" → "several musical genres, including"

Added comma — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:17, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "genres including hip hop" → "genres, including hip hop"

Added comma — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 10:17, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "The album's first track "Pop" refers to the band's" → "The album's first track, "Pop", refers to NSYNC's"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Target synths to Synthesizer

Added wikilink with target. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "and stated it is a preview of Timberlake's 2003 song" → "and called the song a preview of Timberlake's 2003 single"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "The next track "Celebrity" is" → "The next track, "Celebrity", is"

Added commas — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Target dance to Dance music

Added wikilink with target. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "The fourth track "Girlfriend" is an R&B song produced by The Neptunes." → "The fourth track, "Girlfriend", is an R&B song that was produced by the Neptunes." per MOS:THEMUSIC

Reworded sentence with commas. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Remove wikilink on rapper

Removed wikilink — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "gives the song" → "was noted for giving the song"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "from the band's previous album." → "from No Strings Attached."

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Target ballad to Sentimental ballad

Added wikilink with target. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "and uses elements" → "and includes elements"

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "with two-step garage" → "that features two-step garage"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "It was compared" → "it was compared"

Fixed — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "the album's ninth track," → "the ninth track on Celebrity,"

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "Brian McKnight-produced "Selfish"" → "Brian McKnight-produced track "Selfish""

Added word — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "He also described the US version" → "He described the US version"

Removed word — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "the track was included" → "the track was included on Celebrity"

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "that showcased the group's" → "that showcased NSYNC's"

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:05, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Artwork, packaging, and title

• Retitle to Artwork and title

Reworded section — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:09, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "the garish cover to be" → "the garish cover art to be

Added word — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:09, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Wikilink music videos

Wikilinked — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:09, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "said the album's title" → "said the title Celebrity"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:09, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "on the cover is" → "on the artwork is"

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:09, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "that of their self-titled album," → "that of NSYNC's 1997 self-titled debut studio album,"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:09, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "criticizing JC Chasez and" → "criticizing Chasez and"

Removed word — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:09, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Promotion

• Retitle to Release and promotion

Retitled section — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Img needs alt text

The image should already have alt text. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

It looks like it is there now. --K. Peake 15:40, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "with intentions by Jive Records" → "with Jive Records having intentions"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Wikilink uptempo per MOS:LINK2SECT

Wikilinked — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "release to radio stations" → "release to radio stations as the album's lead single" with the wikilink

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "release date was again postponed" → "release date was postponed"

Removed word — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "to perform the new album's songs on tour" → "to perform the tracks from Celebrity on tour"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "campaigns promoting the album" → "campaigns across the US in promotion of the album"

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "in a concert" → "at a concert"

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "the crowd was actively" → "that the crowd was actively"

Added word — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• The president's tour quote is not displayed until page 2

Separated citations throughout article with two pages. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "MTV broadcast a television special titled" → "MTV broadcasted a television special entitled"

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "The album premiere," → "The premiere of Celebrity,"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "with the album's release." → "with the date of the album's ultimate release."

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "Today from June to August 2001." → "Today, between June and August of 2001."

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Tours

• "which was transported by" → "with the setup being transported by"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "used in the" → "used for their"

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Add year of the tour in brackets

Added year — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "$90 million (equivalent to $130 million in 2019), it was one of the biggest tours" → "$90 million, PopOdyssey was the second biggest tour" since 2019 amount is irrelevant

Removed 2019 inflation amount, reworded sentence. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "second tour was" → "second tour for Celebrity was"

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "the Celebrity Tour favored music" → "the tour favored music"

Removed word — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Remove the 2019 amount for the Celebrity Tour

Removed 2019 inflation amount. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Critical reception

• "received generally favorable reviews" → "was met with generally favorable reviews"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "the album has an" → "the album received an"

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "Upon the album's release, AllMusic senior editor Stephen Thomas Erlewine said Celebrity is" → "Erlewine said Celebrity is"

Reduced sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "and is a highlight" → "and called it a highlight"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "wrote although NSYNC" → "wrote that although NSYNC"

Added word — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "of discontent in" → "of discontent on"

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "David Browne of Entertainment Weekly stated Celebrity is" → "Browne stated that Celebrity is"

Reduced sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Wikilink gold diggers

Wikilinked — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "unfortunate the band "couldn’t" → "unfortunate NSYNC "couldn't"

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Wikilink experimental pop

Wikilinked — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "their last album, No Strings Attached"." → "their last album"." since we have already introduced this album

Removed — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "abandon the pop genre and survive" → "abandoned the pop genre and survived"

Added — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "Q said Celebrity" → "The staff of Q said Celebrity"

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "and E! Online stated" → "and the staff from E! Online stated"

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "best singles of the year but" → "best singles of 2001, but"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "for our status' "." → "for our status'"."

Fixed quotation marks — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 11:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Commercial performance

• "In the United States," → "In the US,"

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "began monitoring record retailers" → "had began monitoring record retailers"

Added word — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "the US economy's weaker state" → "the 2000 US economy's weaker state"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "the album was certified" → "Celebrity was certified"

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "of five million units." → "of 5,000,000 units in the US."

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "third-best-selling album" → "third best-selling album"

Removed hyphen — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "which only beat their album" → "which only beat it"

Reduced sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "year-end chart in 2001." → "year-end chart for 2001."

Reworded — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "It sold an additional" → "It has sold an additional"

Added word — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "the BMG Music Club as of February 2003." → "the BMG Music Club, as of February 2003."

Added comma — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "at number one in Canada," → "at number one in Canada on the Canadian Albums Chart," with the wikilink

Expanded sentence with wikilink — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "sales of that year." → "sales of 2001."

Added year — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "by Music Canada for selling over 200,000 units" → "by Music Canada (MC) for selling over 200,000 units in the country"

Expanded sentence with wikilink — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "peaking at number 12 on the Official Albums Chart." → "entering at number 12 on the UK Albums Chart." with the wikilink

Reworded sentence with wikilink — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "received a gold certification from the" → "was certified gold by the"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "over 100,000 copies" → "over 100,000 copies in the UK"

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "number 10 on the Australian ARIA Charts" → "number 10 on Australia's ARIA Albums chart,"

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "selling over 35,000 units." → "selling over 35,000 units in the country."

Expanded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Legacy

• "John Hugar of Uproxx described Celebrity as" → "Hugar described Celebrity as"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:40, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Wikilink swan song

Wikilinked — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:40, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "of their previous album No Strings Attached, saying its" → "of No Strings Attached, with him saying that the album's"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:40, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "before Justin Timberlake began" → "before Timberlake began"

Removed word — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:40, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "concluding it is" → "concluding that it is"

Added word — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:40, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "as Timberlake co-wrote" → "because of Timberlake having co-wrote"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:40, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "than fellow NSYNC member JC Chasez," → "than fellow member Chasez,"

Removed words — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:40, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• "shifted further towards" → "shifted the band further towards"

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:40, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• The Young Folks part should be removed since the website is unreliable due to having two creators that are entertainment fans

I was initially dubious about the source, but their about page seems to suggest that they have an editorial team which allowed the website to be approved for Rotten Tomatoes reviews. Their staff requirements also seem regulated enough that it passes WP:QUESTIONABLE. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:40, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Track listing

• The track listings need to start the headers with "Track listings for..."

Reworded headers — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Target Bradley Daymond to Love Inc. (band)

Retargeted — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:44, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Personnel

• Wikilink Stevie Wonder

Wikilinked — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:48, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Target BT to BT (musician)

Wikilinked and targeted — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:48, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Wikilink Rodney Jerkins

Wikilinked — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:48, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Wikilink Brian McKnight

Wikilinked — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:48, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Wikilink Wade Robson

Wikilinked — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:48, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Target Bradley Daymond to Love Inc. (band)

Retargeted — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:48, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Credits citation should be at the top of this section

Moved citations to top of the section — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:48, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Charts

Weekly charts

• Icelandic Albums (Tonlist) → Icelandic Albums (Plötutíóindi)

Retargeted — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:51, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Year-end charts

• Good

Decade-end charts

• Name which decade this is for in the caption, like you did for the years of the year end ones

Named decade — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:51, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Certifications

• Good

Release history

• The cols below the header should not be in the center, apart from the refs

Centered refs — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:55, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Target Sony to Sony Music

Retargeted — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:55, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

• Target Cassette to Cassette Tape

Retargeted — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 23:55, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

See also

• Good

References

• This section belongs below Notes

Moved section — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Copyvio score looks decent at 36.7%
• Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool

Added archives to all citations. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Cite MTV News as publisher instead for refs 1, 2, 5, 23, 26, 27, 28, 30, 34, 35, 38 and 49; only keep the wikilink for ref 1 though

Cited as publisher — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Cite AllMusic as publisher instead for refs 12 and 21; only keep the wikilink for 12 though

Cited as publisher — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Remove or replace ref 13 since The Young Folks is not a reliable source; this may be hard somewhat since a good amount of info is taken from that source

See legacy section comments. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Cite Uproxx as publisher instead for ref 14

Cited as publisher — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Cite Yahoo! Music as publisher instead for refs 24, 31 and 36; only keep the wikilink for ref 24 though

Cited as publisher — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Remove the author from ref 29

Removed author — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Cite LT24 as publisher instead for ref 33

Cited as publisher — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Ref 37 is inaccessible and as for the archive, that is blacklisted by anti virus software

Removed archive, website is still available. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Cite Album of the Year as publisher instead for ref 39

Cited as publisher — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Cite Metacritic as publisher instead for ref 40

Cited as publisher — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Ref 48 should be replaced by a refname used from the RIAA certification in the table

Used refname parameter — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Cite Music Industry News Network as publisher instead for refs 52 and 91

Cited as publisher — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Cite Oricon as publisher instead for ref 56 and add language parameter

Cited as publisher and added language parameter. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Cite NPR as publisher instead for ref 59

Cited as publisher — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Cite Plötutíðindi as the publisher for ref 75 and target to Music of Iceland

Cited as publisher and retargeted. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Ref 76 should have original URL as well as archive and cite GFK Chart-Track as the sole publisher

The citation is embedded into the chart template. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Ref 82's archive is blacklisted by anti virus software

Replaced archive with Wayback Machine. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Release of Celebrity in the United Kingdom: → Citations regarding the release of Celebrity in the United Kingdom: on ref 93

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

• Release of Celebrity in the United States: → Citations regarding the release of Celebrity in the United States: on ref 95

Reworded sentence — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

Notes

• Good

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold after reviewing in under 24 hours, though I have been impressed with your quick response rate to my suggestions! --K. Peake 15:40, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

I have finished making changes to the article with the exception of the Young Folks source, which I have commented on in the legacy section. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 00:37, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

Update: I have replaced most of the information from the source with new citations, with exception to one sentence on the composition section and the legacy section paragraph. In regards to the latter, I have found another source used in the composition section which could replace it if necessary. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 03:15, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

Angryjoe1111 Apparently this is blocked for legal reasons, in my country of the UK but the new archive is fine... The Young Folks is a fine source though. ✓ Pass time! --K. Peake 06:56, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

I added The New York Times as a second citation accompanying the blocked source. — Angryjoe1111 (talk) 07:08, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.