Talk:Central Park Tower/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Epicgenius in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Comments
edit- Add alt text to every image being used.
- Remove the comma after "900 residential units".
- Add a hyphen between "one third".
- Add an "a" before "single window".
- Remove the comma after "on the third floor".
- "A reinforced concrete" - is the "a" necessary?
- "superstructure is used" → "superstructure ars used"
- "rise the height" - typo for "raise"?
- "Extell announced it were" → "Extell announced it was"
- "in order to" → "to" (less wordy)
- "which would" → "that would"
- Wikilink Michael Kimmelman, Robin Pogrebin, and Azi Paybarah.
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- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I have done all of these now. Regarding rise - I meant that the stairs extend the tower's full height, so I reworded it. Epicgenius (talk) 05:24, 9 July 2021 (UTC)