Talk:Cerro Blanco (volcano)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:33, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Would like to help with this as well when we are at it. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 18:33, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

• Sure, @Sainsf:. Take note that I didn't pass this article through GOCE so verbiage will probably need some scrutiny here.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 18:55, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Alright, so here are my comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:05, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• Known as "Robledo" in which language?
• it is a caldera located Omit "a caldera", it is redundant.
• in a depression Calderas are depressions, so this should be redundant. Also, an explanation of caldera in a few words would be really helpful.
• less well defined caldera to the south and with several lava domes. "well-defined", remove "with"
• Every para should not start with the volcano name, variety is appreciated. Try something like "The caldera" at times.
• up to one metre and are separated by distances up to thirty metres convert templates
• Unlike dunes they do not Comma before "they"
• have been compared to Martian ripple marks By whom?

Regional setting

• where since the Eocene volcanic activity occurs –> where volcanic activity dates to the Eocene
• north of 25°; south of 25° "southern latitude"
• a rising of the arc "a rise in the arc"
• What are pyroclastic and subduction geometry?

Local setting

• Several duplicate links from now on, use this tool to fix them User: Ucucha/duplinks
• Nevado Tres Cruces lies in the west and Nevado Ojos del Salado lies southwest to the west, to the southwest.

• In Pre-Holocene is it rosa white or white rosa?

@Sainsf: Got most of these things; for the Martian ripple marks, would it be OK to mention" geologists" since the papers are written by them? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 16:37, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

Yes. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 16:49, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

@Sainsf: Got these other things as well.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 17:39, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, glad to promote this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:05, 6 May 2016 (UTC)