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Request for COI edits, 15 January 2020

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Delete date of birth, change nationality to American.

Add Comcast to "Organization" (1)

Add "Board" as section and include PepsiCo (2)

Add "Affiliations" as section and include Walmart (3)

Sources: https://corporate.comcast.com/news-information/leadership-overview/cesar-conde-2 (1) https://www.pepsico.com/news/press-release/pepsico-elects-cesar-conde-to-companys-board-of-directors03042016 (2) https://corporate.walmart.com/leadership/cesar-conde (3) 173.213.212.214 (talk) 21:48, 15 January 2020 (UTC)Reply


From: Cesar Conde (born 1973) is an American media executive, currently serving as Chairman of NBCUniversal International Group, and NBCUniversal Telemundo Enterprises, which includes the Telemundo TV network, local stations, Universo Cable Network, Telemundo Digital Enterprises, Telemundo Global Studios, Telemundo Deportes, Noticias Telemundo, and Telemundo Films.

To: Cesar Conde is an American media executive, currently serving as Chairman of NBCUniversal International Group, which includes film and television distribution, home entertainment distribution, channels, film and television production, theme parks and news operations, and NBCUniversal Telemundo Enterprises, which includes the Telemundo TV network, local stations, Universo Cable Network, Telemundo Digital Enterprises, Telemundo Global Studios, Telemundo Deportes, Noticias Telemundo, and Telemundo Films.

Sources: http://www.nbcuniversal.com/business/global-distribution-and-international 173.213.212.214 (talk) 21:51, 15 January 2020 (UTC)Reply


From: Conde joined NBCUniversal in October 2013 as an executive vice president.[2] In 2015 he was named Chairman, NBCUniversal International Group and NBCUniversal Telemundo Enterprises.[3] Conde is responsible for the operations and international expansion of NBCUniversal businesses outside of North America. The group comprises the NBCUniversal International TV and Film group, NBCUniversal International Networks and NBCUniversal International Production divisions. As Chairman, Conde also oversees NBCUniversal Telemundo Enterprises, a premier and fast-growing portfolio of media properties serving Hispanics in the U.S. It includes the Telemundo Network, Universo Cable Network, Telemundo International, Telemundo Local Stations, Telemundo Digital Enterprises and Telemundo Deportes. During his time there During his time there, Conde implemented a digital strategy to reach consumers through streaming services, social media, virtual reality and programming partnerships with BuzzFeed,[4] Snapchat, Mashable, Tastemade[5] and iHeartMedia.

To: Conde joined NBCUniversal in October 2013 as an executive vice president.[2] In 2015 he was named Chairman, NBCUniversal International Group and NBCUniversal Telemundo Enterprises.[3] As Chairman, Conde is responsible for the operations and international expansion of NBCUniversal businesses outside of North America. The group comprises the NBCUniversal International TV and Film group, NBCUniversal International Networks and NBCUniversal International Production divisions. As Chairman, Conde also oversees NBCUniversal Telemundo Enterprises, a premier and fast-growing portfolio of media properties serving Hispanics in the U.S. It includes the Telemundo Network, Universo Cable Network, Telemundo International, Telemundo Local Stations, Telemundo Digital Enterprises and Telemundo Deportes. During his time there While at Telemundo, Conde implemented a digital strategy to reach consumers through streaming services, social media, virtual reality and programming partnerships with BuzzFeed,[4] Snapchat, Mashable, Tastemade[5] and iHeartMedia.

Sources: http://www.nbcuniversal.com/business/global-distribution-and-international 173.213.212.214 (talk) 21:53, 15 January 2020 (UTC)Reply


Change: Under Conde’s leadership, Telemundo hit a milestone in 2016, surpassing Univision for the first time ever,[6] and moving past FOX to become the nation's 4th most-watched network among adults 18-49 in primetime. A large part of this growth came from the SuperSeries™ format that was developed during Conde’s tenure.[7] This format, which was championed by Conde and aimed to evolve the traditional telenovela, has also helped to redefine Hispanic media.[8]

To: Under Conde’s leadership, Telemundo hit a milestone in 2016, surpassing Univision for the first time ever,[6] and moving past FOX to become the nation's 4th most-watched network among adults 18-49 in primetime. In 2019, Telemundo continued its streak as the undisputed leader in Hispanic media made and history for a third consecutive year by closing the season as the number one Spanish-language network in the US in weekday primetime. A large part of this growth came from the SuperSeries™ format that was developed during Conde’s tenure.[7] This format, which was championed by Conde and aimed to evolve the traditional telenovela, has also helped to redefine Hispanic media.[8]

Source: https://www.prnewswire.com/news-releases/telemundo-did-it-again-for-the-third-consecutive-season-the-network-is-set-to-be-the-undisputed-leader-in-spanish-language-weekday-prime-300915220.html 173.213.212.214 (talk) 21:57, 15 January 2020 (UTC)Reply


Change: In 2018, Conde inaugurated the new global headquarters Telemundo Center, which he drove forward from the project’s conceptual stage[9] all the way to fruition. The company invested $250 million to build the facility, which sits on 21 acres and has 15 studios, including two digital studios, as well as virtual and augmented-reality sets.[10] Conde also oversaw the production of over 1000 hours of content for the network’s first-ever Spanish-language broadcast of the FIFA World Cup from Russia in 2018. The network’s broadcast of the FIFA Women's World Cup France 2019™ quarterfinals averaged a 41% increase in total audience over the 2015 Women’s World Cup quarterfinals – and the USA-France match was the second most livestreamed Women’s World Cup match in network history.[11] Telemundo holds these rights through the year 2026.

To: Conde also oversaw the production of over 1000 hours of content for the network’s first-ever Spanish-language broadcast of the FIFA World Cup from Russia in 2018. The network’s broadcast of the FIFA Women's World Cup France 2019™ quarterfinals averaged a 41% increase in total audience over the 2015 Women’s World Cup quarterfinals – and the USA-France match was the second most livestreamed Women’s World Cup match in network history.[11] Telemundo holds these rights through the year 2026. In 2018, Conde inaugurated the new global headquarters Telemundo Center, which he drove forward from the project’s conceptual stage[9] all the way to fruition. The company invested $250 million to build the facility, which sits on 21 acres and has 15 studios, including two digital studios, as well as virtual and augmented-reality sets.[10]

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173.213.212.214 (talk) 21:58, 15 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

Change: Prior to this, Conde was at Univision for ten years, serving as president for five years. To: Prior to joining NBCUniversal, Conde was at Univision for ten years, serving as president for five years.

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173.213.212.214 (talk) 21:58, 15 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

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Change: In 2009, Conde spearheaded the launch of Univision's "Es el Momento" (The moment is now) campaign a comprehensive effort focused on informing the Hispanic community of the importance of education. The campaign received support from the Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation among other sponsors and in March 2011, shortly after launching its second phase, a Town Hall event with President Barack Obama[16] was organized and broadcast to over 2.7 million viewers[17] around the country. The Futuro program became a part of the Es el momento campaign. On May 2011, President Barack Obama announced the appointment of Conde as a member of the President's Advisory Commission on Educational Excellence for Hispanics[18] and on September 2012, Conde was appointed to the Board of Directors of the Foundation for Excellence in Education[19]


To: In 2009, Conde spearheaded the launch of Univision's "Es el Momento" (The moment is now) campaign a comprehensive effort focused on informing the Hispanic community of the importance of education. The campaign has received support from the Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation among other sponsors and in March 2011, shortly after launching its second phase, a Town Hall event with President Barack Obama[16] was organized and broadcast to over 2.7 million viewers[17] around the country. The Futuro program has become became a part of the Es el momento campaign. On May 2011, President Barack Obama announced the appointment of Conde as a member of the President's Advisory Commission on Educational Excellence for Hispanics[18] and on September 2012, Conde was appointed to the Board of Directors of the Foundation for Excellence in Education[19]

And Add: Under Conde’s leadership, Telemundo Global Studios (TGS) launched the TGS Fellowship Program, the first-ever premier professional development project for scripted content producers in Hispanic media. The first-of-its-kind program is dedicated to ushering the next generation of Spanish-language scripted producers and attract and develop the most talented early career producers, providing a comprehensive fast-paced scripted media immersion program that will create a dedicated pipeline of future producers at TGS. The unique fellowship is part of Telemundo Academy, the company's multimedia academic program designed to develop new talent pursuing careers in the media industry starting from the high school age.

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