Talk:Change (Hotel FM song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tbhotch (talk · contribs) 21:17, 7 April 2019 (UTC)

@Tbhotch: Any news regarding this? I just wanted to make sure you didn't forget about this. Take your time and disregard this lol Greetings; Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:08, 16 April 2019 (UTC)

Technically, you agreed with it. © Tbhotch^™ (en-2.5). 19:10, 17 April 2019 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality (prose is clear and concise, without exceeding quotations, or spelling and grammar errors):

   B. MoS compliance (included, but not limited to: lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists):

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources (it also includes an appropriate reference section):

   B. Citation of available and reliable sources where necessary (including direct quotations):

   C. No original research:

   D. No copyright violations:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   edit wars, multiple edits not related to the GAN process, etc. (this excludes blatant vandalism):

6. Does it contain images (or other media) to illustrate (or support) the topic?

   A. Images (and other media) are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images (and other media) are provided where possible and are relevant, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Resolved comments from Tbhotch

;General Same as with "Tornero", you're using American English Could you give some further examples? Infobox Alexandra Ivan, Băruță -> Alexandra Ivan, Gabriel Băruță  Done Lead "Alexandra Ivan and Băruţă" -> "Alexandra Ivan and Gabriel Băruţă" (?)  Done "but criticizing the song as unspectacular and cheesy" -> but critici[s]ing the song as "unspectacular" and "cheesy"  Done Background "Allegedly" -> "According to Bryan, he..." Allegations have legal connotations  Done Reception "it received mixed response from music critics." -> Same as "Tornero"  Done "similarly calling it cheesy" -> I can't access the source, but if she called it "cheesy" it should be in quotations  Done "Commercially, "Change" failed to impact any country's official chart," -> I mean, yes, but the source never says this  Done In Düsseldorf From your text: "two female backing dancers in black suits and hats performing a dance routine involving trumpets"; from the source "Two female backing dancers in black suits and hats were performing a dance routine involving trumpets"  Done From your text; " The background LED screen showed pulsating circles and ovals" ; from the source: "The background LEDs showed pulsating circles and ovals"  Done Points awarded "12 from Italy and Moldova, ten from Belgium" -> Same as "Tornero"  Done References Source 1, European Broadcasting Union. It never mentions "Change"'s length  Done Source 6, Prinz.de. Dead link, replace with archived link  Done Source 17, Star Gossip Magazine -> "In Romanian"  Done Sources 25 and 26, Eurovision World -> I didn't see this with "Tornero", where it should be replaced as well, but: "Eurovisionworld is a fan community for everyone who has a passion for Eurovision Song Contest. We are not affiliated with EBU or the organisation behind Eurovision Song Contest".  Done

Article on hold. © Tbhotch^™ (en-2.5). 19:10, 17 April 2019 (UTC)

@Tbhotch: Thank you for the review... I responded to your comments. Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:58, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

I have no other concern, so I pass its nomination. Well done. © Tbhotch^™ (en-2.5). 21:44, 18 April 2019 (UTC)