Talk:Changwon
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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
editThis article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Zsj.engl300. Peer reviewers: D.steel, Steeniejung.
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No Gus???
editWhy aren't there any Gus for this city- it has over 500,000 people?66.27.215.103 (talk) 15:50, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
Needs Edit by Someone with Native Level English Skill
editThis article contains numerous grammatical errors and quite a bit of it is just plain unintelligible. I could help on the obvious errors but the unintelligible bits are beyond me. Perhaps a native Korean with good English skills and someone with native English and some Korean skills could team up and decipher the intended meaning. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.51.185.47 (talk) 00:52, 11 October 2012 (UTC)
City Location
editThe image showing the city's location in the right bar at the top of the page is incorrect. It has Namhae highlighted in red, not Changwon... — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.77.224.212 (talk) 09:50, 11 August 2013 (UTC)
This suggestion should be denied as the mentioned image is correct in displaying Chagnwon's location in the map. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jsyjj92 (talk • contribs) 00:41, 10 March 2014 (UTC)
A possible start for correcting and polishing the page of Changwon
editcheck it out :)
-grammar, wording, general conventions were edited -ordering of topics, and the general content flow was revised -marked incomprehensible paragraphs with [clarification needed] for others to pay attention to -removed any unnecessary info or inaccurate info
further suggestions:
- would like to add several images like of parks, the city's symbol, graphs of economical stats, etc.
- history section needs to be entirely redone - improvement in detail, accuracy, relevancy
- other sources that is not in Korean, to strengthen the quality of references
— Preceding unsigned comment added by Jsyjj92 (talk • contribs) 00:46, 10 March 2014 (UTC)
- Please would an interested editor assess the above rewrite offered in 2014, incorporate what is useful, blank the user page as WP:COPYARTICLE, and leave a note here when done? – Fayenatic London 19:35, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
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Great additions! Can't spot any errors. D.steel (talk) 20:05, 4 April 2017 (UTC)