Really interesting biography. It's great that there are a lot of sources on Hatfield, but they really need to be more fully integrated into the article. As a reader, I don't know what source to check to verify most of the details in this article. There are some footnotes in the article for a few details, but more should be added. Also, I think we might consider referring to her in the same manner throughout the article rather than switching from Charlotte to Charley. Even though it's not her real last name, it is probably OK to refer to her as Hatfield throughout the article. Alternatively, what do sources refer to her as? Whatever most of them use, we should probably also use. I, JethroBT drop me a line 07:41, 12 June 2014 (UTC)Reply
