Talk:Check (Meek Mill song)/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Zmbro in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zmbro (talk · contribs) 00:49, 25 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Grabbing. – zmbro (talk) (cont) 00:49, 25 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

Comments:

  • Could we shorten "Encore, Los Angeles, CA" to "Encore (Los Angeles)"?
  • "Throughout the video" → "In the video"?
  • "American record producers Metro Boomin and Southside handled the song's production, while they also co-wrote it with Mill." since this is the start of the body, how about ""Check" was produced by American record producers Metro Boomin and Southside, who co-wrote it with Meek Mill"? with links of course
  • "Young Thug's 2014 track "Hundreds (I Had A Dream)", which features Mill" → "Young Thug's Mill-featuring track "Hundreds (I Had A Dream)" (2014)"
  • Were these "series of tweets" of note?
  • You can remove the 2015 from "On June 29, 2015,"
  • "Def Pen" does not strike me as reliable. It honestly looks WP:SELFPUBLISHED
  • Minor but wasn't Consequence still Consequence of Sound in 2015?
  • "Sweeney said the song consists of "three synth notes and a huge beat"" this reads more like an actual description and not a reaction to it. I'd ditch it here or move it up to comp.
  • "Kevin Goddard depicted that Mill" don't think "depicted" is the right word here
  • "and opined that it "should probably have opened the LP"" we can paraphrase this
  • Do we know who directed the video during the initial shoot? Was it Jordan or was he brought in to finish it? I'd clarify this
  • Is the Young M.A. freestyle notable?
  • I ran the bot to archive all the URLs but it looks like it missed ref 3