Talk:Cheek to Cheek Tour/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 09:12, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

Lead

• You should note that the tour began in 2014
• The lead is rather short. Try to cover up information from the article's other sections (e.g. background, critical response)

Infobox

• ALT text for the cover

Background

• the tour ended on November 24, 2014 → we don't need an exact date; just name the month
• through multiple avenues like television → through multiple endeavours such as television
• so Gaga had been looking at such → so Gaga had been looking for such

Development

• and its scheduled a post-Grammy → too many words; just simplify to "and its post-Grammy"
• including Hollywood Bowl → including at Hollywood Bowl
• on May 30; the Royal Albert Hall in London on June 8; and Radio City Music Hall in New York City → we need normal commas here, not semi-colons
• Gaga continued with the dresses from the PBS special → Gaga wore the same dresses from the aforementioned PBS special
• explained that he and his team did the wardrobe for the dancers and Gaga. They first took references → also did the wardrobe for the dancers and Gaga along with his team, and elaborated how they first took references
• and afterwards zeroed in on eight costumes → and afterwards selected eight costumes
• along with its accessories → shouldn't it be "their" accessoires?
• custom made shoes → custom-made shoes
• and move freely in the long gowns → what should "freely" mean here?
• and Gaga with the Brian Newman Quintet → and Gaga by the Brian Newman Quintet

Critical response

• I decided to edit this section by myself

Commercial reception

• was high demand for the tickets → no need for "the"
• secondary market average price for New Year's Eve performance → secondary market average price for the New Year's Eve performance
• was the most expensive show at Las Vegas → was the most expensive show in Las Vegas
• was average $297.64 over a few hundred → was average $297.64 for over a few hundred
• on sale for their concert of June 8 → on sale for their concert on June 8
• Tickets for June 26–27 shows → Tickets for the June 26–27 shows
• also sold out before them being available for general → also sold out before they were available for the general
• He also wrote about the show at Borgata Events → Who is "he" and why is this sentence important?
• as the 69th highest grosser → as the 69th-highest grosser

Set list

• Why is the note important since that exact same song was also included on the listed set list?

Shows

• The "Date" row needs to be "!scope="row" -ed
• The "TOTAL" in "Box office score data" should not be shouted

Notes

• All notes need a full stop before the reference(s).

Other things

• 48.2% is a little a bit high for copyviolation
• As far as I checked them, the references source the assertions made in this article

Outcome

•  On hold for 7 days — some things to be fixed before this can be passed for GA status. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:28, 19 April 2019 (UTC)

@IndianBio: Note it's been for over a month on hold now. You'll have to start working on it or otherwise I will sadly have to fail this. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:00, 27 May 2019 (UTC)

Failing due to inactivity. Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:59, 31 May 2019 (UTC)

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